Wheee!!!!

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I'm so excited because the Georgia school updated their class schedule for 2013 today! I will fly to America to enroll in the school next week. Before I will take some classes for this year, they updated their class schedule for next year!

I looked around the pictures of classes for next year, but it's very difficult for me to choose three of them. I can't choose only three. I feel like that I'd love to take all classes that I'm interested in. Even so, I can't do that. I have to choose three classes.

I think when I enroll in the school, I can see real artwork that I will be able to take next year at classrooms. So, after I check them out, I'd love to make my decision. I can't help thinking about next year right now. I'm so excited!!
Feb 08th 2012 22:40 bennatan

  • I'm so excited because the Georgia school updated their class schedule for 2013 today!
  • I'm so excited because today the Georgia school updated its class schedule for 2013!

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  • I will fly to America to enroll in the school next week.
  • Next week I will fly to America to enroll in the school.

 

  • Before I will take some classes for this year, they updated their class schedule for next year!
  • Before I have taken classes for this year, they already updated their class schedule for the next year!

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • I looked around the pictures of classes for next year, but it's very difficult for me to choose three of them.
  • Even having studied the pictures of next year's classes, it's very difficult for me to choose three of them.

 

  • I can't choose only three.
  • I can't choose just three.

 

  • I feel like that I'd love to take all classes that I'm interested in.
  • I'd like to take all the classes that look interesting.

 

  • Even so, I can't do that.
  • Unfortunately, that won't be possible.

 

  • I have to choose three classes.
  • I'm going to have to choose three classes and that's all there is to it.

 

  • I think when I enroll in the school, I can see real artwork that I will be able to take next year at classrooms.
  • I think once I'm at the school, I can see the actual artwork that I will be able to work on next year.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • So, after I check them out, I'd love to make my decision.
  • I'll check them out and make my decision.

 

  • I can't help thinking about next year right now.
  • I can't get next year's program off my mind.

 
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Feb 10th 2012 20:52 yumi
Thanks for the correction and the comment. I really appreciate you. I love the correction!
Feb 09th 2012 03:49 William

  • Before I will take some classes for this year, they updated their class schedule for next year!
  • Before I've even taken a class this year, they have already updated their class schedule for next year!

 
Feb 10th 2012 20:53 yumi
Hi, William-san. Thanks as always for checking out my correction and show me good corrections. I really appreciate you. Talk to you tomorrow!

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