A Chat With A Beauty Saloon Staff

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I went to the beauty saloon yesterday to have my hair dye much blighter.

When I entered the saloon, I realized that one of the staffs wasn't there. I asked about her to the staff whom I always ask to cut my hair and have my hair dye. She told me what happened to her.

She was the youngest staff in the saloon. She worked hard, and she received some awards from some beauty competitions. I thought her future as a beautician was bright. Even thought many people expected her future, after she started to hang out with her newest boyfriend, she has become lazy. She sometimes didn't shown up because by the early morning she drunk with her boyfriend. She became drunk and couldn't leave for work. Every single night she had been practising cutting, curling ans so on to improve her skills before she met her boyfriend. She quit it.
She started to be absent herself from the saloon without saying anything. The beauty saloon's owner fired her.

When I listened to the story, it was very sad. The staff had taught her hardly. She had spent a plenty time for her to raise her as a good beautician. I really think if the person can't feel responsibility for one thing, he/she can't achieve anything. I hope some day she will realize her fault and go back to the best place for her.
Feb 11th 2012 22:05 指先

  • A Chat With A Beauty Saloon Staff
  • A Chat With A Beauty Saloon Staff Member

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • I went to the beauty saloon yesterday to have my hair dye much blighter.
  • I went to the beauty saloon yesterday to have my hair dyed much brighter.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • When I entered the saloon, I realized that one of the staffs wasn't there.
  • When I entered the saloon, I realized that one of the staff members wasn't there.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • I asked about her to the staff whom I always ask to cut my hair and have my hair dye.
  • I asked about her to the staff member whom I always ask to cut my hair and have my hair dyed.I asked about her to the staff member who I always ask to cut and dye my hair.

 

  • She was the youngest staff in the saloon.
  • She was the youngest staff member in the saloon.**there's a few ways to say this: 1. She was the youngest of the salon staff. 2. She was the youngest staff member in the salon.

 

  • She worked hard, and she received some awards from some beauty competitions.
  • She worked hard, and she had received some awards from some beauty competitions.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • Even thought many people expected her future, after she started to hang out with her newest boyfriend, she has become lazy.
  • Even thought many people expected had expectations of her future, after she started to hang out (you can also say "hanging out" instead of "to hang out") with her newest boyfriend, she had become lazy.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • She sometimes didn't shown up because by the early morning she drunk with her boyfriend.
  • She sometimes didn't shown up because by the early morning she was drunk with her boyfriend.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • She became drunk and couldn't leave for work.
  • She became got drunk and couldn't leave for work.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • Every single night she had been practising cutting, curling ans so on to improve her skills before she met her boyfriend.
  • Every single night she had been practising cutting, curling and so on to improve her skills before she met her boyfriend.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • She started to be absent herself from the saloon without saying anything.
  • She started to be absent herself from the saloon without saying anything.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • The beauty saloon's owner fired her.
  • The beauty saloon's owner fired her.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • The staff had taught her hardly.
  • The staff had taught her hardly.The staff had put a lot of effort into teaching her.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • She had spent a plenty time for her to raise her as a good beautician.
  • She had spent a plentiful amount of time for her to raise her as a good beautician.

 

  • I really think if the person can't feel responsibility for one thing, he/she can't achieve anything.
  • I really think that if the a person can't feel responsibility for one something, he/she can't achieve anything.

 

  • I hope some day she will realize her fault and go back to the best place for her.
  • I hope some day that she will realize her faults and go back to the best place place that is best for her.

 
That is really sad. Hopefully she comes to her senses and returns to being a beautician.
Feb 12th 2012 01:36 Butterfly
This situation make me feel angry because there are a lot of people would like to have work and she left an opportunity
Feb 12th 2012 16:46 yumi
Hi, 指先san. Thanks for the correction and the comment. Yeah, I really hop so too.
Feb 12th 2012 16:47 yumi
Hi, Marisol. Thanks for the comment. I can understand your feelings very well. There are lots of people not to get good jobs here. It's also very sad.

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