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In modern society, most people think professors earn lots of money in the university and doing complicated research, but they seldom worry about if students absorb the knowledge teaching in the class. However, without studying hard in the lab and money, professors wouldn’t learn the most important knowledge in the world to give to students. In my opinion, government should increase professors’ salaries to improve their quality of education.
First of all, the professor with enough money could buy more textbooks that published in other countries to study, and they don’t have to worry about if they can afford what their family need, so they must concentrate on how to improve the educational quality.On the other hand, if a professor doesn’t earn adequate salaries, they probably will use their knowledge to do something illegal, like producing poison. Moreover, professor with less stress could teach happily in the class and spend more time on their student.
In addition, professors who gain more money won’t lose interest in teaching student, and can do more things what they want to do while they have free time. For instance, my uncle who is a professor travels around the world in the summer vacation every year shares his experience in the class, becoming the most famous teacher in his school. In contrast, professors with no money couldn’t broaden their horizons to satisfy students’ desire.
It is clear that professors should earn more money to improve the quality of higher education. The more money they gain, the hard they teach. Professsors with lots of money always have less things to worry about, and they could spend more time gaining more useful knowledge in what they teach and making a high quality class.
First of all, the professor with enough money could buy more textbooks that published in other countries to study, and they don’t have to worry about if they can afford what their family need, so they must concentrate on how to improve the educational quality.On the other hand, if a professor doesn’t earn adequate salaries, they probably will use their knowledge to do something illegal, like producing poison. Moreover, professor with less stress could teach happily in the class and spend more time on their student.
In addition, professors who gain more money won’t lose interest in teaching student, and can do more things what they want to do while they have free time. For instance, my uncle who is a professor travels around the world in the summer vacation every year shares his experience in the class, becoming the most famous teacher in his school. In contrast, professors with no money couldn’t broaden their horizons to satisfy students’ desire.
It is clear that professors should earn more money to improve the quality of higher education. The more money they gain, the hard they teach. Professsors with lots of money always have less things to worry about, and they could spend more time gaining more useful knowledge in what they teach and making a high quality class.
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In modern society, most people think professors earn lots of money in the university and doing complicated research, but they seldom worry about if students absorb the knowledge taught in the class.
However, without studying hard in the lab and with the aid of money, professors wouldn’t know the most important knowledge in the world to give to students.
In my opinion, the government should increase professors’ salaries to improve their quality of education.
First of all, the professor with enough money could buy more textbooks that are published in other countries to study, and they don’t have to worry about if they can afford what their family needs, so they can concentrate on how to improve the educational quality.
Moreover, professors with less stress could teach happily in the class and spend more time on their students.
In addition, professors who gain more money won’t lose interest in teaching students, and can do more things what they want to do while they have free time.
For instance, my uncle who is a professor travels around the world during summer vacation every year shares his experience in the class, becoming the most famous teacher in his school.
In contrast, professors with no money couldn’t broaden their horizons to satisfy their students’ desires.
The more money they gain, the more they can teach.
Professors with lots of money always have less things to worry about, and they could spend more time gaining more useful knowledge in what they teach and make a high quality class.
I agree with your argument, teachers should definitely get more money so they can teach students in better ways.
In modern society, most people think university professors earn a lot of money in the university and doing complicated research, but they seldom worry about if students absorb the knowledge taught in the class.
However, without adequate funding, and studying hard in the labs, professors wouldn’t learn the most important knowledge in the world to give to students.
First of all, the professors with enough money could afford more textbooks that are published in other countries to study, and concentrate on improving the quality of education students are given without having to worry about not being able to provide for their family.
On the other hand, if a professor doesn’t earn an adequate salary, they may use their knowledge to do something illegal, like producing poison.
Moreover, professors with less stress could teach happily in their classrooms, and spend more time on their students.
In addition, professors who earn more money won’t lose interest in teaching students, and will have more of an opportunity to do what they want in their free time.
For instance, my Uncle, who is a professor, travels around the world during Summer vacation every year and then shares his experience with his students which has brought him great recognition in his school.
In contrast, professors with no money couldn’t broaden their horizons to satisfy students’ desire to learn.
The more money they earn, the harder they work.
Professors with a lot of money always have less things to worry about, and they could spend more time gaining more useful knowledge in what they teach and making a high quality class.
The only real change I made was changing "probably" to "may." In my opinion, this sounds a little better, and shows that some teachers who do not earn money could look to illegal activities but not all of them. If you believe all of them will, you can go ahead and use "probably." ^^
In modern society, most people think (that) professors earn lots of money in the university and do complicated research, but they seldom worry (about) how students will absorb the knowledge teaching in the class.
However, without studying hard in the lab and without a greater supply of money / funds, professors wouldn’t have the wherewithal and resources to properly teach students.
In my opinion, government should increase professors’ salaries to give an incentive for higher quality teaching.
First of all, the professor with enough money could buy more textbooks that published in other countries to study, and he / she doesn't have to worry about it if he / she can afford what his / her family needs, so he / she ought to concentrate on how to improve the educational quality.
On the other hand, if a professor doesn’t earn adequate salaries, he / she could abuse his / her knowledge to do something illegal, like producing poison.
For instance, my uncle who is a professor travels around the world during summer vacation every year, sharing his experience in the class, becoming the most famous teacher in his school.
Professors with lots of money always have less things to worry about, and they could spend more time gaining more useful knowledge in what they teach and in cultivating a high quality class (environment).
In today's society, many people believe professors earn lots of money in the universities and doing complicated research and that they seldom worry whether students absorb the knowledge they learn in the class. [The phrase "but" didn't make sense with the "however" in the next sentence]
However, without studying hard in the lab and earning money, professors would not learn the most important knowledge in the world that they have to give to students. [When you have a phrase like " _______ and _______", it is important to keep the phrases consistent. For example, "studying hard and earning money" is correct since earning and studying are transitive verbs. "Studying hard and money " is grammatically incorrect since studying is a transitive verb and money is a noun.]
In my opinion, the government should increase professors’ salaries to improve their quality of education.
First of all, the professors with enough money could buy more textbooks that are published in other countries to study. Second, they would not have to worry about whether they could afford what their family needs, and as a result, better concentrate on how to improve the educational quality.[one important grammatical rule is to keep your tenses consistent. "Do not" is present tense. "Would not" is future tense. Present tense refers to action in the present time. Future tense refers to action that will take place in the future. It is important to be consistent in using the same tense in a sentence/paragraph. For example, it is correct to say "Professors could afford to buy more, and they would not have to worry". It is also correct to say "Professors can afford to buy more, and they do not have to worry", but it is incorrect to say "Professors could afford to buy more, and they do not have to worry"]
On the other hand, if a professor doesn’t earn an adequate salary, he could use his knowledge to do something illegal, such as producing poison. [If you refer to a professor, use he or she. If you refer to professors, use they. The word "like" is informal slang when stating examples. It is better to use "such as".]
Moreover, a professor with less stress could teach class with more motivation and spend more time with his students.
In addition, [Too many transitive phrases can make the paragraph sound awkward] Professors who gain more money won’t lose interest in teaching students, and can do more things that they want to do when they have free time.
For instance, my uncle, who is a professor, travels around the world in the summer vacation every year and shares his experiences in the class. As a result, he is the most famous [popular?] teacher in his school.
In contrast, professors with no money couldn’t broaden their horizons to satisfy their students’ desire.
The more money they earn, the better they teach. [Hard refers to how strong an object is or how difficult a problem is. For example, "this rock is hard". "This problem is hard". "It is harder for him to write English at night". The phrase "teaching harder" is colloquial slang and informal. It is grammatically incorrect]
Professors with high salaries always have less things to worry about, and they could spend more time gaining more useful knowledge in what they teach and make their classes of higher quality. [When referring to the money people earn, it is more common to use the phrase "income" or "salary"]
http://www.ted.com/talks/dan_pink_on_motivation.html
This guy did a study and found that monetary rewards actually end up stifling creativity and actually makes things worse.
I agree with you (Annie) that increasing the salaries of professors "can" improve the quality of education. Everyone here would note that in the title "can" was used instead of "does" or "surely (improves)" or anything to that effect. It's not a guarantee, but a possibility.
Yet, as in any possibility, we can't be certain. And since we can't be certain, the only option left is to maintain a balance between too much and too little salaries. I think that both too much and too little salaries would cause the quality of education to drop.
The question therefore that remains now is "by how much should the government increase the salary of professors without the risk of spoiling them with too much money?"
I hope this one helps.
I agree with you, Gian, but it's difficult to me to write such a composition that put both sides together, I can't finish the writing in 30 minutes, I can just stand on one side.
I think what you wrote is good. It's actually one of the longest that I've read.hehe
Keep it up.