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Both the reading passage and the lecture discuss the decrease of reading literature. The author suggests that reading for less literature, such as novels, plays, and poems has a bad effect on people.However, the speaker presents a rather different view of the subject under discussion.
The reading passage maintains that novels encourage people. If people decline to read literature, they will miss important benefits.In contrast, the lecutre begins its challenge of the author’s statements by arguing that other books, such as science books, also stimulate people to image what they read, and It’s high quality too.
It is noted in the article that TV, video, and Web page which with poorly written effect people to low level of culture. However, contrary to the author’s opinion, the speaker asserts that there are lots of good composition in music and movie. He thinks it’s just a cultural change, and it isn’t a big deal.
Finally, the reading suggests that the literatural writers lack audiances. The speaker, however, indicates that sometimes it’s the authors’ fault, because their writing is too hard for people to read and to understand.
The reading passage maintains that novels encourage people. If people decline to read literature, they will miss important benefits.In contrast, the lecutre begins its challenge of the author’s statements by arguing that other books, such as science books, also stimulate people to image what they read, and It’s high quality too.
It is noted in the article that TV, video, and Web page which with poorly written effect people to low level of culture. However, contrary to the author’s opinion, the speaker asserts that there are lots of good composition in music and movie. He thinks it’s just a cultural change, and it isn’t a big deal.
Finally, the reading suggests that the literatural writers lack audiances. The speaker, however, indicates that sometimes it’s the authors’ fault, because their writing is too hard for people to read and to understand.
The author suggests that reading less literature, such as novels, plays, and poems has a bad effect on people.
In contrast, the lecture begins its challenge of the author’s statements by arguing that other books, such as science books, also stimulate people to imagine what they read, and it’s high quality too.
It is noted in the article that TV, video, and websites which with poorly written affect people in a negative manner. [This is more natural. Also, effect = noun and affect = verb.]
However, contrary to the author’s opinion, the speaker asserts that there are lots of good compositions in music and movies.
Finally, the reading suggests that the literature writers lack audiences.
The speaker, however, indicates that sometimes it’s the authors’ fault because their writing is too hard for people to read and to understand. [My English professor always instructed me to never use commas before "because".]
Also, be sure to put a space between the period and the first word of the next sentence.
The author suggests that reading for less literature, such as novels, plays, and poems has a bad effect on people.
The reading passage maintains that novels encourage people. *Encourage people to do what?
If people decline to stop reading literature, they will miss important benefits.
In contrast, the lecture begins its challenge of the author’s statements by arguing that other books, such as science books, also stimulate people to get a mental image of what they read, and It’s are of high quality too.
It is noted in the article that TV, video, and web pages which with are poorly written effect people [to low level of culture.]* *I would say "negatively" instead of this
However, contrary to the author’s opinion, the speaker asserts that there are lots of good compositions in music and movies.
Finally, the reading suggests that the literature writers lack audiences.
Both the reading passage and the lecture discuss the decrease in the reading of literature.
Both the reading of the passage and the lecture discuss the decrease in reading literature.
The author suggests that reading for less knowledge in literature, such as novels, plays, and poems, has a bad effect on people.
The reading of the passage maintains that novels encourage people.
If people decline in reading literature, they will miss important benefits.
In contrast, the lecture begins its challenge with the author’s statements by arguing that other books, such as science books, also stimulate people to image what they read, and that they're of high quality too.
It is noted in the article that TV, videos, and Web pages which with are poorly written bring people to a low level of culture.
However, contrary to the author’s opinion, the speaker asserts that there are a lot of good compositions in music and in movies.
Finally, the reading suggests that the literary writers lack audiances.
Hmm, you were comparing the opinions of two people point-by-point; try to do the comparison person-by-person - discuss first all of the opinions of one person before that of the other. It might be more coherent that way.
Keep it up.