The rainy season is over
Jul 10th 2011 21:08
japan
I went cycling to Chigasaki city in Kanagawa prefecture yesterday. I heard the news that the rainy season is over at the cycling shop I stopped on the way.
My face, neck and legs were sunburnt when I came back home. I immediately brought a suntan cream today.
My face, neck and legs were sunburnt when I came back home. I immediately brought a suntan cream today.
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At the cycling shop I stopped on the way I heard the news that the rainy season is over.
I noticed when I came back home that my face, neck and legs were sunburnt
I immediately brought a suntan cream today.
My face, neck and legs were sunburnt when I came back home. -> I arrived home and then in my house I got sunburnt.
Where clauses are positioned in the sentence can change their meaning. If you break down the sentences you can see which parts are attached to which other parts.
"the rainy season is over at the cycling shop". You don't want to connect these two ideas directly as they are unrelated. Therefore you should move the "shop part" to be next to the "heard the news part" as they are more related.