The Definition of A Word

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of M-K-G's latest journal entries Nov 02nd 2011 19:41 correction-please
I've tried writing the definitions of some words.
I'd appreciate if you'd correct them!
Thank you very much.

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(1) An address is used for specifying a location where a person want to get his letter reached.

(2) An album is a book which has blank pages for the preservation of photographs.

(3) A floor is a surface in buildings on which people stand.

(4) Tea is made from dried leaves of plants used for beverage.

(5) A towel is a piece of absorbent cloth and used for wiping things.
Nov 02nd 2011 20:50 s

  • (1) An address is used for specifying a location where a person want to get his letter reached.
  • (1) An address is used for specifying a location where a person wants to get his letter to reach. (Better: "An address is used for specifying the destination of a letter." However, that's only one function of an address, not the definition--I would say, "an address is the location where someone lives.")

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  • (4) Tea is made from dried leaves of plants used for beverage.
  • (4) Tea is made from dried leaves of plants and used to make a beverage.

 

  • (5) A towel is a piece of absorbent cloth and used for wiping things.
  • (5) A towel is a piece of absorbent cloth and used for wiping things.

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These sentences aren't incorrect (except for the bits that I corrected), but most of them sound a bit unnatural.
Nov 03rd 2011 01:16 M-K-G
> However, that's only one function of an address, not the definition

Ah ... I think that's quite right.
Thank you so much for frequently answering my questions =)
Nov 02nd 2011 21:37 tony

  • (4) Tea is made from dried leaves of plants used for beverage.
  • (4) Tea is a beverage made from (the) dried leaves of plants. [This is more clear if you first say that it is a beverage, and then go on to describe what kind of beverage. "Made from the dried leaves of plants" is a dependent clause here (also called a relative clause). This could be made more explicit by writing "Tea is a beverage that is made from the dried leaves of plants", but "that is" is not necessary.]

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  • (5) A towel is a piece of absorbent cloth and used for wiping things.
  • (5) A towel is a piece of absorbent cloth and used for wiping things. [I agree with Sandi's correction here. I just wanted to add that with the correction, this sentence has the same structure as my corrected version of (4). "Used for wiping things" is a dependent clause describing "a piece of absorbent cloth" further.]

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One of the things I like best about Japanese grammar is that verb phrases describing a noun come before the noun. This seems to me much more straightforward and elegant than what one has to do in English most of the time-- that is, use dependent/relative clauses. In English one even has to use a dependent clause where one would use the past tense of an adjective in Japanese, since adjectives don't have tenses in English.
Nov 03rd 2011 01:26 M-K-G
>this sentence has the same structure as my corrected version of (4)

Now you mention that, I've realized the strangeness of (4) ...


Your sense of the Japanese language is amazing!
I wasn't aware of that difference you referred to.
Nov 03rd 2011 01:45 tony
>Your sense of the Japanese language is amazing!

I wish. My understanding is still extremely limited. This is a difference which some beginning Japanese learners find very difficult, though, so I have explained more times than I can remember that modifying nouns is much more logical in Japanese than in English: [名詞]の[名詞], [ナ形容詞]な[名詞], [形容詞][名詞] or [動詞][名詞]. In English, instead, one has adjectives before the noun, some past tenses and participles of verbs used as if they were adjectives (tired, confusing) and placed before the noun, and relative clauses (restrictive and nonrestrictive) after the noun, sometimes introduced by that/which/who/etc., sometimes not. Anyone in their right mind would prefer the Japanese way of doing this. :-)
Nov 03rd 2011 01:46 tony
Oh, and I forgot prepositional phrases which come after the noun.
Nov 03rd 2011 01:47 tony
(Usually). :p
Nov 02nd 2011 21:41 tony

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