My PC does not work well....
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Recently, we are in Obon holidays, which is memorial for our ancestors. Though I don't know whether PC has this holidays, my PC seems to want no-working. After a few weeks later, I will get a new PC, so I want him to hold up....
We have recently begun the Obon holidays, which serve as a memorial for our ancestors.
The content is good, it is just the structure of your phrase that is not correct!
Though it seems like my PC is also on holiday, since it does not want to work.
Again, it is just the structure that needs work. Instead of saying "I don't know whether" in this situation, since you're jokingly explaining something that is not certain, you can also say "it seems like".
In a few weeks I will be getting a new PC, so I would like this one to hold up in the meantime....
The PC can't do many tasks at once or work for long time!
I really worry that I can finish to write this message to you!
phew, It seems like OK.....
I'm extremely interested in learning Japanese and learning about Japanese customs, so I hope to read more from you! I am very impressed with your English!
Recently, we are in the Obon holidays, which is a memorial for our ancestors.
Though I don't know whether PC has this holidays, my PC seems to want not to work.
http://lang-8.com/221538/journals/1056168/Obon%253Athe-festival-of-soul
Thank you for your nice corrections!