Rice ball

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I don't wake up in the morning of Monday.

Because I kept waking up until ealry morning during the weekends...
(For example, reading books, watching TV or movies)

This morning, I waked up at 7: 30 am.
Then I took a shower.

Today, I couldn't do Yoga.
I have to do Yoga tonight.

By the way, I made a rice ball today.
http://www.amie.or.jp/~raintree/
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Onigiri

Then I ate it as lunch.

Do you like a rice ball?
I love a rice ball.
I will make a rice ball tomorrow.
Feb 02nd 2009 19:14 Joshua

  • I don't wake up in the morning of Monday.
  • I don't wake up on Monday mornings. (自然)

 

  • Because I kept waking up until ealry morning during the weekends...
  • (?) because I am awake until early morning during the weekends... (この文は完成していない。"because"の前か文の後ろに、上の文を加えなければならない。正しい文は: -I don't wake up on Monday mornings because I am awake until early morning during the weekends. -Because I am awake until early morning during the weekends,[大切なコンマ] I don't wake up on Monday mornings.)

 

  • (For example, reading books, watching TV or movies)
  • (For example, reading books or watching TV or movies) (ここは2つだけのことがあります:"reading books"と"watching TV or movies"。だから、"or"を使うべきです。ところで、この文は完成していない。)

 

  • This morning, I waked up at 7: 30 am.
  • This morning, I woke up at 7:30 am. ("waked"は単語じゃない。)

 

  • By the way, I made a rice ball today.
  • By the way, I made an onigiri today. ("rice ball"もいいですけど、お握りの意味と少し違いますね。)

 

  • Do you like a rice ball?
  • Do you like rice balls?

 

  • I love a rice ball.
  • I love rice balls.

 
オニギリを食べたい~
Feb 03rd 2009 06:24 tenchu

  • I don't wake up in the morning of Monday.
  • I didn't wake up Monday morning.don't wake up in the morning of Monday.

 

  • Because I kept waking up until ealry morning during the weekends...
  • Because I kept staying up all night last waking up until ealry early in the morning during the weekend. s...

 

  • Today, I couldn't do Yoga.
  • Today, I couldn't do Yoga, but i will tonight.

 
very good.

"staying up all night" is more natural.
"staying up untill the early morning" while correct is very stiff. Its too proper. Most Americans do not say this.

If you have two sentences about the same thing you can combine them using commas.
"Today i couldn't do yoga" + "I have to do yoga tonight" = "Today I couldn't do Yoga, but I will tonight." p.s. I LOVE onigiri!^__^
Feb 03rd 2009 14:23 reona

>TAPJoshua
>tenchu

Thank you for correcting my diary.

There are many mistakes.hahaha

I hope you'll enjoy eating Onigiri in your countries.

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