a trip

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I planned to go to see my wife's parents this weekend,but my wife won't be back together with me since she has to receive one-day's training onmodern management in Saturday.What a pity!
Another important reason for this trip is that my son is living there,being breeded by my wife's mother,the guy's grandmother. At the beginning of the new year 2009,we took it back to live with the old couple. My wife and I are always busy with each one's work,so we have no much time to look after him,who is too young for the gardenkinder.
I wrote this one the way going back home. I hope you like it.Haha.
Thanks for my wife to help put it onto the Lang-8.
Mar 07th 2009 02:23 iiminn

  • I planned to go to see my wife's parents this weekend,but my wife won't be back together with me since she has to receive one-day's training onmodern management in Saturday.
  • I planned to visit my wife's parents this weekend, but my wife won't be going back together with me since she has to receive one-day's training in modern management on Saturday.

 

  • Another important reason for this trip is that my son is living there,being breeded by my wife's mother,the guy's grandmother.
  • Another important reason for this trip is that my son is living there, being taken care of by my wife's mother, his grandmother. ("breed" is only used on animals)

 

  • At the beginning of the new year 2009,we took it back to live with the old couple.
  • At the beginning of the new year 2009, we took him back to live with the old couple. ("it" is only used for animals or objects)

 

  • My wife and I are always busy with each one's work,so we have no much time to look after him,who is too young for the gardenkinder.
  • My wife and I are always busy with our own work, so we do not have much time to look after him, who is too young for the kindergarten.

 

  • I wrote this one the way going back home.
  • I wrote this on the way going back home.

 

  • Thanks for my wife to help put it onto the Lang-8.
  • Thanks to my wife for helping me put it onto the Lang-8.

 
The flow of the passage is generally all right, but remember to put in a spacing after punctuation marks. :)

Hope you had a good trip!

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