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The Rockets beat the Lakers I watch NHL instead of NBA.
My city's team, Vancouver Canucks, won the third game in the series against Chicago Blackhawks.
Now, th...
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Swine Flu is Coming My country has been slow in dealing with this. Only earlier today did they issue a travel advisory against nonessential travel to Mexico...
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Anti-Fake Hope you'd learn a lot from the seminar. (I think it feels more natural to use the word counterfeit than fake for products that copy fro...
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Rockets Failed to Blazers Haha, I'm not a big basketball fan, especially since my city's team (Vancouver Grizzlies) sucked in the past and then got sold to Memphis...
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A Cold Spring I agree. The weather is so strange these days. If we don't start trying to improve the environment, the situation would become very bad.
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About the 'Earth Hour' Day As always, very informative and well written. Thank you, Nathan. T
Mar 22nd 2009 19:42
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About Retirement wow..difficult diary~
I want to write sometihing for you..
but,, I will give up. but your English diary was good. I think :)
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About Retirement Excellent presenation - if I had an hour to spare right now, I'd love to debate it! I turn 60 in a matter of days so I'm feeling very cl...
Mar 18th 2009 14:51
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About Robots Very analytical Nathan. Great job!
Mar 14th 2009 20:16
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About Economy Ah, I thought you were Japanese.... sorry I wrote the notes in Japanese. (>_<) Hopefully you can still understand by the hanzi... I...
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About the Project Manager Wow. I think that is a very thought out entry. Great job Nathan! Be careful with putting "to" where "that" should go....
Mar 08th 2009 13:56
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what a happy day Good job Nathan, it sounds like you both had fun!
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a trip The flow of the passage is generally all right, but remember to put in a spacing after punctuation marks. :)
Hope you had a good trip!
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Thought from an English Book 加油~!!
I hope that someday we talk in English more fruently. I will do my best as the same as you will do, I swear...^^
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About the modern work styles Thanks for Greg. You have done a so fine correction for me . I appreciate you very much. I learned a lot from your correction. Thanks!
Mar 05th 2009 06:51
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About the modern work styles You did a good job. Be careful with adding multiple ideas in each sentence. It is difficult for the reader to follow a sentence when ther...
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About the Monitor Camera Guns I don't really understand what a "monitor camera gun" is. I've never heard the term before. I think you are talking about "...
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A-Warm-Day's Feeling Thanks for Ann . From your corrections for me , I read it out that you are a sunshine girl , loving life , full-hearted, and hating cold...
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A-Warm-Day's Feeling I love your diary today. :) It's very well written.
It's exactly why I love spring. It's because it feels like a new life, it feels li...
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A little tired Thanks for Ann. I am not just a technical communicator.
Maybe there are such meticulous divisions of work such as technical communicator...
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A little tired (Be calm in making a proper arrangement?)
<I like your expression, iiminn. It looks more natural than mine.>
Thanks for iiminn.
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A little tired I try to rest and study equally. Even though it seems like I push myself a lot, I do takes rests. :) I guess people just don't see that. ...
真有意思!加拿大也有风沙。 我的老家有时有风沙,不过我现在住的城市没有风沙。
I watch NHL instead of NBA. My city's team, Vancouver Canucks, won the third game in the series against Chicago Blackhawks. Now, th...
My country has been slow in dealing with this. Only earlier today did they issue a travel advisory against nonessential travel to Mexico...
Hope you'd learn a lot from the seminar. (I think it feels more natural to use the word counterfeit than fake for products that copy fro...
Haha, I'm not a big basketball fan, especially since my city's team (Vancouver Grizzlies) sucked in the past and then got sold to Memphis...
I agree. The weather is so strange these days. If we don't start trying to improve the environment, the situation would become very bad.
OK! I will keep it in mind! Smile!
hi, T. As always, convictive corrections. Thanks.
As always, very informative and well written. Thank you, Nathan. T
wow..difficult diary~ I want to write sometihing for you.. but,, I will give up. but your English diary was good. I think :)
Excellent presenation - if I had an hour to spare right now, I'd love to debate it! I turn 60 in a matter of days so I'm feeling very cl...
Very analytical Nathan. Great job!
Ah, I thought you were Japanese.... sorry I wrote the notes in Japanese. (>_<) Hopefully you can still understand by the hanzi... I...
友達、すごいです。
Wow. I think that is a very thought out entry. Great job Nathan! Be careful with putting "to" where "that" should go....
Good job Nathan, it sounds like you both had fun!
The flow of the passage is generally all right, but remember to put in a spacing after punctuation marks. :) Hope you had a good trip!
加油~!! I hope that someday we talk in English more fruently. I will do my best as the same as you will do, I swear...^^
I love that song!!! I listen to it so many times when I was young.
Thanks for Greg. You have done a so fine correction for me . I appreciate you very much. I learned a lot from your correction. Thanks!
You did a good job. Be careful with adding multiple ideas in each sentence. It is difficult for the reader to follow a sentence when ther...
hello good afternoon from Thailand
yeah , They are the surveillance cameras.
I don't really understand what a "monitor camera gun" is. I've never heard the term before. I think you are talking about "...
Thanks for Ann . From your corrections for me , I read it out that you are a sunshine girl , loving life , full-hearted, and hating cold...
I love your diary today. :) It's very well written. It's exactly why I love spring. It's because it feels like a new life, it feels li...
Thanks for Trish. You are so kind.
Thanks for Ann. I am not just a technical communicator. Maybe there are such meticulous divisions of work such as technical communicator...
(Be calm in making a proper arrangement?) <I like your expression, iiminn. It looks more natural than mine.> Thanks for iiminn.
I agree with you that it is important to take a rest! Rest well :)
I try to rest and study equally. Even though it seems like I push myself a lot, I do takes rests. :) I guess people just don't see that. ...
your are a programer ? cheer up ... just a short time the time is going to be fust.... then after today is tomorrow..
Thanks for Trish. You have given me so much good advice, that I will correct all the mistakes at next writing.
Good work, Nathan. Thank you.
Lets hope you have a fruitful new year!