The Hinamatsuri!

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In Japan,we have a festival which is called Hinamatsuri in Japanese on March 3.

Hina means a doll of princess and matsuri means festival.
Before March 3,we display special dolls to celebrate girl's growth and good health and celebrate on that day.

As for boys,we have a festival which is called Kodomonohi in Japanese on May 5 as well.

We also display special doll or a warrior's helmet on that day.

After festival is over,we have to put away those dolls.

I have two kids who are girl and boy.
Therefore,I have to display special dolls both of days that Hinamatsuri and Kodomonohi.

The Hinamatsuri has coming soon!!!
But I haven't displayed special dolls for my daughter yet.

I will be busy...

Feb 23rd 2010 23:29 Tez

  • We also display special doll or a warrior's helmet on that day.
  • We also display special dolls or a warrior's helmet on that day.

 

  • After festival is over,we have to put away those dolls.
  • After the festival is over,we have to put away those dolls.

 
This is really good!!! You just have to work on making words plural such as in sentence number 7. you spelled the word "doll" right but you didn't add a "s". Other than that, you know how to speak english.

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Jontez Robbins(the correcter)
Feb 23rd 2010 23:34 Pecha

  • In Japan,we have a festival which is called Hinamatsuri in Japanese on March 3.
  • In Japan,we have a festival on March 3rd which is called Hinamatsuri in Japanese. on March 3.

 

  • Before March 3,we display special dolls to celebrate girl's growth and good health and celebrate on that day.
  • Before March 3rd,we display (show) special dolls to celebrate girl's growth and good health and celebrate on that day.

 

  • As for boys,we have a festival which is called Kodomonohi in Japanese on May 5 as well.
  • As for boys,we have a festival on May 5th as well. which is called Kodomonohi in Japanese. on May 5 as well.

 

  • We also display special doll or a warrior's helmet on that day.
  • We also display (show) special doll or a warrior's helmet on that day.

 

  • After festival is over,we have to put away those dolls.
  • After the festival is over,we have to put away those dolls.

 

  • I have two kids who are girl and boy.
  • I have two kids, who are a girl and a boy.

 

  • Therefore,I have to display special dolls both of days that Hinamatsuri and Kodomonohi.
  • Therefore,I have to display (show) both special dolls both of days that on (Children's day) Hinamatsuri and Kodomonohi days.

 

  • The Hinamatsuri has coming soon!!!
  • The Hinamatsuri has is coming soon!!!

 

  • But I haven't displayed special dolls for my daughter yet.
  • But I haven't displayed (shown) special dolls for to my daughter yet.

 
Feb 24th 2010 08:33 natsuko

Hi,Tez!

It is nice to meet you and thank you for correcting my sentences.
Wow,I made simple mistakes!!!
I have to to study English harder!
Feb 24th 2010 08:37 natsuko

Hi,Pecha!

Thank you for correcting my wrong sentences!
I think that I should study English harder!!!

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