these day i am so tired
Dec 10th 2008 13:04
these day i am so tired because i woke up 4:30AM everyday
This month, my church has special morning service
i am singer of praise band , so I have to sing a song at that time
anyway i don't like wake up early , but i have to do !
i will pray for poor people , sick people, lost hopes peaple and
missionary in all nations, and my father and me.
This month, my church has special morning service
i am singer of praise band , so I have to sing a song at that time
anyway i don't like wake up early , but i have to do !
i will pray for poor people , sick people, lost hopes peaple and
missionary in all nations, and my father and me.
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Dec 10th 2008 13:26
Emma
Very few mistakes. You are very well expressed in English.
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- these day i am so tired
- these days I am so tired
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- these day i am so tired because i woke up 4:30AM everyday
- These days I am so tired because i wake up 4:30AM everyday.
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- This month, my church has special morning service
- This month, my church has special morning services;
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- i am singer of praise band , so I have to sing a song at that time
- I am singer with the choir , so I have to sing a song during that time.
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- anyway i don't like wake up early , but i have to do !
- AnywayIi don't like to wake up early , but I have to do it !
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- i will pray for poor people , sick people, lost hopes peaple and
- I will pray for poor people , sick people, people who lost hope and
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- missionary in all nations, and my father and me.
- missionaries in all nations, and my father and I.
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Dec 10th 2008 22:11
jjmountain
Your English is good! You just need to work on your writing skill, remember capital letters and comma marks are placed like this ** and, and, and ** not like this and , and , and , **
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- these day i am so tired
- these These day I am so tired
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- these day i am so tired because i woke up 4:30AM everyday
- These day I am so tired because I wake up 4:30AM everyday every day.
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- This month, my church has special morning service
- This month, my church has a special morning service
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- i am singer of praise band , so I have to sing a song at that time
- I am the singer of our praise band, so I have to sing a song at that time then ('then' sounds much more natural).
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- anyway i don't like wake up early , but i have to do !
- anyway i Anyway, I don't like to wake up early, but i have to! do !
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- i will pray for poor people , sick people, lost hopes peaple and
- i I will pray for poor people, sick people, lost hopes peaple and and people without homes.
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- missionary in all nations, and my father and me.
- (This shouldn't be a new sentence) -> missionary in all nations, and my father and me I.
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