Spa in snow
Dec 26th 2010 22:07
I went to coffee shop. It was empty. I took my place. Out of the window I could observe some old snow falling down and some sanatoriums from the beginning of 20th century. Most of them are closed and destroyed. It is a pity that they deteriorate. Szczawnica was small romantic spa. It is still popular among people, who want spent here holidays. I don’t understand why so many buildings is in so bad condition. Only small number of them is renovated and makes the center of the town very beautiful
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I went to coffee shop.I went to the coffee shop, but it was empty."
It was empty."I went to the coffee shop." and "It was empty." are two very short sentences that can be combined making a complex sentence. "I went to the coffee shop, but it was empty."
"I went to the coffee shop, but it was empty, so I took my place. Out the window I could see the snow falling, and some sanatoriums from the beginning of the 20th century. Most of them have been closed and destroyed. It's a pity how they deteriorate. Szczawnica is a small, romantic spa, and it is still popular among people who spend their holidays here. I don't understand why so many buildings here are in such a bad condition. Only a small number of them are renovated and it makes the center of town very beautiful."
It's one of the many ways that you could word this entry. It just helps to make it flow better.
You're doing very well!