I want to design consumer electronics!

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After working on device design for about a year, I became more and more interested in another design field, the consumer electronics design. I think the device design is too unfree to be well done. For example, one of my recent jobs is to design a sensor, and the marketing required this new product should be designed as an invisible thing. How to design something invisibly? As a greenhorn, I think I'm not good enough to do so high realm job. However, the consumer electronics design is relatively free, it seems more suit for me.
Aug 18th 2010 18:13 dolo

  • I think the device design is too unfree to be well done.
  • I think that device design is too constrained to be well done.

 

  • For example, one of my recent jobs is to design a sensor, and the marketing required this new product should be designed as an invisible thing.
  • For example, one of my recent jobs is to design a sensor, and the marketing required this new product to be designed as an invisible object.

 

  • How to design something invisibly?
  • How do you design something to invisible?

 

  • As a greenhorn, I think I'm not good enough to do so high realm job.
  • As an amateur, I think I'm not good enough to do such a high level job.

1 people think this correction is good.  
either way, i think your job sounds amazing.
Aug 18th 2010 23:21 zsteinour

  • After working on device design for about a year, I became more and more interested in another design field, the consumer electronics design.
  • After working on device design for about a year, I became more and more interested in another design field, the consumer electronics design.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • How to design something invisibly?
  • How do you design something invisibly?

 

  • As a greenhorn, I think I'm not good enough to do so high realm job.
  • As a greenhorn, I do not (or don't) think I'm not good enough to do a job with so much responsibility.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • However, the consumer electronics design is relatively free, it seems more suit for me.
  • However, the consumer electronics design is relatively free, so it seems more suited for me.

 
Dolo's correction of your second and third sentences is good, I added a few other suggestions farther down. Good job, and I hope you can get into the consumer electronics design field. Cheers!
Aug 19th 2010 05:58 尚禮

I went through and gave "native nods" for corrections that I thought were the best. Good luck with everything. :)
Aug 20th 2010 16:56 Perry Chang

Thank you for your help, all my dear friends!

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