The Making Of Steel

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Because of some special historical reasons, the former Soviet Union's novel The Making Of Steel used to be very popular in China. Recently, I began to read it. I noticed that with the growth of my age and increasing of my knowlege, I became less and less love of my country. So I hope I can get my patriotism back through reading this book, which is about an age full of passion and purity.
Sep 02nd 2010 17:00 Tac

  • I noticed that with the growth of my age and increasing of my knowlege, I became less and less love of my country.
  • I noticed that with the growth of my age and increasing of my knowlege, I became less and less in love of with my country.

 
Great English! I just had to correct a small mistake. You can also say:
"I loved my country less and less"
or more complex:
"I found that I loved my country less and less"
Sep 03rd 2010 07:20 尚禮

  • Because of some special historical reasons, the former Soviet Union's novel The Making Of Steel used to be very popular in China.
  • Because of some special historical reasons, the former Soviet Union's novel _The Making Of Steel_ used to be very popular in China.

 

  • I noticed that with the growth of my age and increasing of my knowlege, I became less and less love of my country.
  • I noticed that with the growth of my age and increase of knowledge, I have become less and less in love with my country.

 

  • So I hope I can get my patriotism back through reading this book, which is about an age full of passion and purity.
  • So I hope (that) I can get my patriotism back through reading this book, which is about an age full of passion and purity.

 
Sep 03rd 2010 17:06 Perry Chang

尚禮 and Tac, Thanks a lot!

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