It was cold in Tokyo

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Feb 9, 2011 20:25
We'd been seeing warmer days since the beginning of February, but today was too cold. I heard, although I'm not sure whether it's true, it snowed in early morning in Tokyo.

I'm looking forward to spring soon.
ashash
Thank you for your correction!
Feb 9, 2011 20:30
  • We'd been seeing warmer days since the beginning of February, but today was too cold.

  • We'd We've been seeing warmer days since the beginning of February, but today was too cold (wrong pronoun)

 
  • I heard, although I'm not sure whether it's true, it snowed in early morning in Tokyo.

  • I heard, although I'm not sure whether it's true, it snowed in early morning early in the morning in Tokyo. (Wrong order of words)

 

Great English! Good work!

Feb 9, 2011 20:34 Takashi
Thank you so much.
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We'd been seeing warmer days since the beginning of February, but today was too cold. I heard, although I'm not sure whether it's true, it snowed in early morning in Tokyo. I'm looking forward to spring soon.


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