My memorie of a trip.
Feb 18th 2011 16:17
My pleasure of trips is a communication.
I want to teach the most popular place from local peoples.
I went to trip in the Hawaii with my friend about 10 years ago.
We were going to swim at the famous beach in there.
However,We were stop on an advice of a young man.
He was employees of the hotel.
He was very kindness to us some well.
He said,I am the most favorite beach is The Turtle bay.
We tried to go the Turtle bay.
There was very beautiful beach.
I found some turtles in there then.
We stayed in that place a few hours.
These was a valuable experience in my life.
The young employees gave a memories of trip for us.
I have experience that went to foreign trips several times.
However,I can not speak English well in those place.
I am shy,As well as Many Japanese people.
I would more enjoyed it,If I were proficient in English.
I must study English more.
Have a nice weekend!
I want to teach the most popular place from local peoples.
I went to trip in the Hawaii with my friend about 10 years ago.
We were going to swim at the famous beach in there.
However,We were stop on an advice of a young man.
He was employees of the hotel.
He was very kindness to us some well.
He said,I am the most favorite beach is The Turtle bay.
We tried to go the Turtle bay.
There was very beautiful beach.
I found some turtles in there then.
We stayed in that place a few hours.
These was a valuable experience in my life.
The young employees gave a memories of trip for us.
I have experience that went to foreign trips several times.
However,I can not speak English well in those place.
I am shy,As well as Many Japanese people.
I would more enjoyed it,If I were proficient in English.
I must study English more.
Have a nice weekend!
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My memory of a trip.
I will try to communicate my pleasure of trips.
I want to tell you about the most popular place according to local people.
I went on a trip to Hawaii with my friend about 10 years ago.
We were going to swim at the famous beach there.
However, we were stopped by a young man and took his advice.
He was an employee of the hotel.
He was very kind to us as well.
He said, "I know the favorite beach, The Turtle Bay".
We went to the Turtle Bay.
There was very beautiful beach!
I found some turtles there.
We stayed there for a few hours.
It was a valuable experience in my life.
The young employees gave us memories from that trip.
I have experience going on foreign trips several times.
However, I can not speak English a lot in those places.
I am shy, as well as many Japanese people.
I would enjoy it if I were proficient in English.
I went to Hawaii about ten years ago as well, I was a little kid an don't really remember much... but I do remember how beautiful the beaches were! I went scuba diving there and saw a huge tortoise.
I also remember wonderful waterfalls, were you able to see any waterfalls when you were there?
But,I do not know your comment.“I hope～for..”
ただ、あなたのコメントの一行目、I hope～の意味が読み取れませんでした。
僕からの添削を希望していないという意味でしょうか？
I am sorry.ごめんなさい。
Could you tell me?教えてもらえませんか？
By the way,I have experience go to the Hawaii 5times.
ところで、私はハワイに５回ほど行った経験があります。
You were meet a turtle,weren't you? あなたも亀に会ったのですね？
I didn't found waterfalls.私は滝を見つけられませんでした。
You have many good memories with your family.
あなたは家族との素敵な思い出をたくさん持っていますね。
I hope I make it with my sons.
私も息子たちとそういった思い出をたくさんつくれるといいなぁ。
I hope I didn't misinterpret your meaning.
言葉を口に載せることが願っていません。
I don't wish to put words into your mouth.
はい、亀を会っていました！
Yes, I met a turtle!
ハワイに滝がとても美しいですよ。
In Hawaii, the waterfalls are very beautiful!
私はあなたの意味を理解できました。
You have wide-minded,Thank you.
あなたは広い心を持っています、ありがとう。
I will talk about memories of Hawaii at sometime.
私は、またいつかハワイの想い出についてお話しするでしょう。
Let's enjoy study.
楽しく学習しましょう。
Memories of a Trip.
I'm going to tell you about how much I had on a a trip.
I want to talk to you about the hot spots according to the locals.
I went to Hawaii with a friend about 10 years ago.
We were going to swim at the beach.
However, we changed our minds when a young man gave us some advice.
He was an employee of the hotel we stayed at.
He was very kind to us as well.
He said, "My favorite beach is The Turtle Bay."
So we went to Turtle Bay.
It was a such a beautiful beach!
We saw some turtles there.
We stayed at the beach for a few hours.
I really had a good time.
The young employees gave us some really great memories on our trip.
I have gone on foreign trips countless times, but I can't speak English well in most places.
However,I can not speak English well in those place.
I am shy, just like many Japanese people.
I would have enjoyed it more if I were proficient in English.
I should study English more.
1. Always capitalize the first letter of key words (words longer than 2-3 characters)
2. Your English is pretty good, but sounds extremely unnatural.
ポイント：
１．タイトルで絶対に言葉の最初の字を大きく書いてください。しかし、小さい言葉（2－3字以内 例えば：the, but, and, ofなど。）には大切な言葉ではないから、小さく書いたほうがいいです。
２．英語は上手ですね！文法は少し違うんですけど、頑張ってください！
へえ、ハワイに行った？ラッキー、行ったことがないからすごいだと思います。
英語に頑張って！
それではまた次回、
デレク
あなたの英語を指導する才能はすごいですね!
Thank you very much for all you have done.
ありがとうございます、大変お世話になりました。
The Hawaii is very beautiful island.
ハワイは大変美しい島です。
However,I want to go to the U.S.A than Hawaii.
でも、私はハワイよりもアメリカ本土へ行きたいんですがね。
I'm glad to see you again.
またお会いできたらうれしいです。
五郎
アメリカのどこへ行きたい？
デレク
英語を使うとお返事が遅くなるので日本語で失礼します。
いいえ、決してお世辞ではありませんよ。
すごく丁寧で受け手側の気持ちをよく理解している解説です。
心から感謝しています。
アメリカで最も行きたいところはグランドキャニオンやヨセミテです。
私は九州ですから自然は残っていますが、大陸とは比較になりません。
私の息子たちはまだ小さいので彼らがせめてローティーンの頃までに世界の広さを見せてあげたいと思っています。
アラモ砦で自由と犠牲と愛国心を教えるのもいいかもしれません。
なぜならば、私が子供のころにビッグアメリカを体験していたら、その後の人生に影響があったのではないかと思っているからです。
もちろん、カリフォルニアやマイアミ（７マイルブリッジも大好きです）、冬の東海岸などの大都市も良さそうですね。
西部の雰囲気も味わってみたいですが、日本人の私は少し怖い気もします。
デレクくんの出身はどちらあたりでしょうか？
アメリカの文化や風習を教えてもらえたら嬉しく思います。
日本は良い国だと誇りを持っていますが、国土も国民の思考も狭い。
様々な国々が互いに学びあって、こどもや孫たちのために素晴らしい未来を創っていけることを願うばかりです。
五郎