Essay.
Apr 15th 2011 04:56
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Many children are becoming overweight. This problem is connected with the sale of junk food in schools, so may be it is time to find the desision of this problem?
In my opinion, the main problem is bad influence of junk food on the health of children, because boys and girls gain weight because of a great deal of other factors, such as constant sitting in front of a computer, or TV-set etc. The government must pay more attention to the quality and good of the school-menu. Because of junk food and chocolates, which are sold in schools, for example in slot machines, a lot of children,eating tasty, but, of course, unhealthy food, have different stomach, intestinal and other diseases.
On the other hand, it is rather difficult to change all the school diet, because salads and other wholesome food cost at a higher price and not every person can let himself have a good, but more expensive breakfast at school everyday.
As the conslusion, I want to say, that we should care about the food of school students. From the childhood and adolescence they should get the necessary quantity of vitamins and other nutrients. This little step will let improve the health of children in general.
In my opinion, the main problem is bad influence of junk food on the health of children, because boys and girls gain weight because of a great deal of other factors, such as constant sitting in front of a computer, or TV-set etc. The government must pay more attention to the quality and good of the school-menu. Because of junk food and chocolates, which are sold in schools, for example in slot machines, a lot of children,eating tasty, but, of course, unhealthy food, have different stomach, intestinal and other diseases.
On the other hand, it is rather difficult to change all the school diet, because salads and other wholesome food cost at a higher price and not every person can let himself have a good, but more expensive breakfast at school everyday.
As the conslusion, I want to say, that we should care about the food of school students. From the childhood and adolescence they should get the necessary quantity of vitamins and other nutrients. This little step will let improve the health of children in general.
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The problem is connected with the sale of junk food in schools. Wouldn't now be the best time to find the solution to this problem?(I felt that it's best to make this two complete thoughts. Also, I changed your question a little bit. It was a little unclear, so this is my suggestion.)
In my opinion, the main problem is the affect of the junk food on children. (I think that "bad influence of junk food" sounded a bit strange, so this is what I would suggest) Boys and girls gain weight due to a great deal of factors; however, one example would be the lack of exercise due to sitting in front of a computer, TV-set, etc. (I feel that you have great ideas. I think that using the word "exercise" would emphasize what you're trying to argue.)
The government must pay more attention to the quality and good of the school-menu.(I wasn't really certain what you were trying to say by "good", so I would either just take it out completely or add a different word.)
Due to the junk foods sold in school vending machines, such as chocolate, children are eating unhealthy. The children like the taste, but the intake can cause medical problems, such as intestinal issues and other diseases.(This entire statement seemed to be all over the place, so here's my suggestions.)Slot machines refer to casinos, I believe that you meant vending machines. :) Chocolate is a type of junk food, so it's best to use that as an example of a junk food rather than saying "junk food and chocolates".
On the other hand, it is rather difficult to change all the school diet, because salads and other wholesome foods cost at a higher price. and Not every person can let himself (or herself) have a good quality, but more expensive breakfast at school everyday.
As the In conslusion, I want to say, that we should care more about the food of school students.
From the childhood and to adolescence, they should get the necessary quantity amount of vitamins and other nutrients.
This little small step will let allow us to improve the health of children in general.