dialogues in English (2/2)

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Feb 06th 2009 04:04

This is the part two of my translation from the novel.
Please point out any grammatical errors!

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#11 I’m feeling something strange.

#12 -I wanna buy my house like yours.
-Come'n, how old are you?
-18. What about you? 22?

#13 Can I stay here tonight? It's too much trouble to go home.

#14 You had better call your home.

#15 Hehe.. I will change you for Musasi. [he's playing a video game.

#16 You trust me ,right? Then I will show you what I truly want. I’m not talking about a video game.

#17 I'm going home [he got insulted so he stood up and is going to leave his friend's house.]

#18 I was thinking that he was my best friend...I've never expected
that he thinks of me that way...

#20 If he found that I was looking like a faker and calling like this, he would despise me.

#21 Eventhough, I hope to be found one day... by him.

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P.S. Thanks guys for correcting my errors of the part one.

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Feb 06th 2009 04:25 atylmo

English
Japanese

#12 -I wanna buy my house like yours.
#12 -I wanna buy a house like yours.

-Come'n, how old are you?
-Come on, how old are you?

#14 You had better call your home.
#14 You had better call home.

#18 I was thinking that he was my best friend...
#18 I thought he was my best friend...

I've never expected
I never expected

#21 Eventhough, I hope to be found one day...
#21 Even though, I hope to be found one day...

Feb 06th 2009 04:56 tonyc

English
Korean , Mandarin

that he thinks of me that way...
that he thought of me that way...

#20 If he found that I was looking like a faker and calling like this, he would despise me.
#20 If he found that I was acting like a fake and called like this, he would despise me.