I so long has writed
Oct 23rd 2009 23:13
Ah~~~~~
Hello,everybody~!
大家好~！
I miss you very much.
我很想念你们哦。
I so long has writed because I'm busy everyday.
我之所以很长时间都没有写作是因为我太忙了。
I went to the west lake of Huizhou last week.
我上个星期去了惠州西湖。
Do you know this place?It's famous in China.
你们知道这个地方嘛？它在中国可是很有名的。
If you have a chance you should go and have a look.It's beautiful！
如果你有机会的话你可真应该去走走看看。很漂亮的哦！
And then I have a new job these day.It's about sell jewels.
然后我在这几天找到了一份新工作。是关于销售珠宝的。
I know many in jewels since I done this work.
自从我接触这份工作我对珠宝有了很多的认识。
I feel my English haven't in progress.
我感觉到我的英语没有进步。
I hope you can help me and tell me where I wrong.
所以我希望你们可以帮助我并且告诉我我错在哪里了。
Thank you~!o(∩_∩)o
谢谢你们咯~！呵呵
Hello,everybody~!
大家好~！
I miss you very much.
我很想念你们哦。
I so long has writed because I'm busy everyday.
我之所以很长时间都没有写作是因为我太忙了。
I went to the west lake of Huizhou last week.
我上个星期去了惠州西湖。
Do you know this place?It's famous in China.
你们知道这个地方嘛？它在中国可是很有名的。
If you have a chance you should go and have a look.It's beautiful！
如果你有机会的话你可真应该去走走看看。很漂亮的哦！
And then I have a new job these day.It's about sell jewels.
然后我在这几天找到了一份新工作。是关于销售珠宝的。
I know many in jewels since I done this work.
自从我接触这份工作我对珠宝有了很多的认识。
I feel my English haven't in progress.
我感觉到我的英语没有进步。
I hope you can help me and tell me where I wrong.
所以我希望你们可以帮助我并且告诉我我错在哪里了。
Thank you~!o(∩_∩)o
谢谢你们咯~！呵呵
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I so long have not written for a long time -> OR 'I have not written in a long while.'
I so long have not written a journal entry for a long time because I'm busy everyday.
And then I have a new job these days.
It's about has to do with selling jewels.
I know many in much about jewels since I done started this work job.
I feel my English haven't in made any progress.
I hope you can help me and tell me where have I gone wrong.
I think that your English has not fallen in standard and you have done a good job writing this journal entry.
The west lake sounds interesting. I should take note of it if I do get to visit China. ^^