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Aug 12th 2009 12:18

它的名字是Bam Bam。我们在车库發現小猫。 Bam Bam 和 Oz 很好的朋友。

Aug 12th 2009 12:25 亦亦Yiyi

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你很有同情心很善良，中文也不错。
希望小猫过得好，你也要开心每一天！

Sep 19th 2009 02:27 coosco

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Hello, it's pretty good what you wrote.

Oct 12th 2009 22:53 winona

哈哈，希望你汉语越来越棒！
要学简体哦，看你有繁体了

Nov 10th 2009 09:10 Tan

you can also say:
我小猫的名字是Bam Bam。我们在车库發現的它。 Bam Bam 和 Oz 很要好。

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