Special Weekend.

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Yuuki's latest journal entries Dec 09th 2011 10:26
Today is a Saturday. It's special for me.

That's because tomorrow is day-off and I have an event.

Actually, it is tomorrow that is special not today.

But I have waited today because work days in this week are the end by today.


Anyway, I'll meet my dear friend tomorrow.

She gave me a motive to study English.

She has been in Canada to study, and will come back temporarily in Japan.

She told me that, and I'll be able to meet her.

I'm really looking forward to the day.


However, my English can't improve yet although I have the intention of studying as hard as I can.

I can't be close to her in English and anything for good.

But I want her to recognize my growing someday.
Dec 09th 2011 10:53 Michelle

  • That's because tomorrow is day-off and I have an event.
  • That's because tomorrow is my day-off and I have an event.

 

  • Actually, it is tomorrow that is special not today.
  • Actually, it is tomorrow that is special, not today.

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  • But I have waited today because work days in this week are the end by today.
  • But I have waited today because work days in this week are the end by today.(I don't understand this sentence. Do you mean something like, "But I consider today special because the work week ends today."?

 

  • She gave me a motive to study English.
  • She gave me the motivation to study English.("A motive" is correct, but "motivation" would be a better word to emphasize your interest in learning. A motive means a reason to do something, but motivation means an interest and excitement to do something.)

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  • She has been in Canada to study, and will come back temporarily in Japan.
  • She has been in Canada to study, and will come back temporarily to Japan.

 

  • I can't be close to her in English and anything for good.
  • I can't be close to her in English skill and anything for good.(Don't quite understand this sentence. Mostly it is the "and anything for good" that confuses me.)

 

  • But I want her to recognize my growing someday.
  • But I want her to recognize my growth someday.(Growing is a verb, but growth is a noun that you can use in this instance.)

 
Dec 09th 2011 13:27 Yuuki
Thank you for your corrections.

In the third correction, the sentence you gave me is almost the same what I want to say.

And the last second sentence, I want to mean that she are superior to me in everything including English skills, so I can't catch up with her forever.(Does it make sense?)
I used "for good" for "indefinitely, forever", is it wrong?
Dec 09th 2011 23:14 Michelle
I kind of understood it, but I wasn't sure. "For good" is a phrase that does mean forever. It is used in instances when there is an action taking place. "I am leaving for good." It needs to be closely associated with an action so the reader knows you mean forever, not it is good.
In your sentence you were talking about having skills so the existence of the word "good" made me think you were talking positively about her skills. So here it would be better to use something like "forever".
A good sentence for this would be something like, "Compared to her, I am forever behind in English skill."
Dec 10th 2011 07:11 Yuuki
Thank you for your description in detail.
Probably I could understand that.

For example, "I would keep using this pen for good."
How about this? Isn't it wrong?
Dec 10th 2011 07:59 Michelle
Yes, that is a better use for it. It's only odd in that pens only last a short period of time, but that is technically the way it is used. Much better.

Here's some extra examples.
"I've kept this old shirt for too long. I am throwing it out for good this time."
"I won't be back. I'm moving away for good."
"I've tried to repair this broken sink many times, but I think I finally fixed it for good."
Dec 10th 2011 09:13 Yuuki
Yes, I also thought the pen might not be good example but I couldn't come up with any example else(>_<)

And thank you for many examples!!
They are very helpful.
I'll study about "for good" by using these examples.
Dec 09th 2011 11:43 Ryan the Wired

  • Today is a Saturday.
  • Today is Saturday.

 

  • It's special for me.
  • It means a lot to me.

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  • That's because tomorrow is day-off and I have an event.
  • That's because tomorrow is my day off and I'm going to a special event.

 

  • Actually, it is tomorrow that is special not today.
  • In that case, tomorrow would be special, not today.

 

  • But I have waited today because work days in this week are the end by today.
  • I've waited for today all week and it's finally the weekend.

 

  • Anyway, I'll meet my dear friend tomorrow.
  • That means I'll be meeting one of my dear friends tomorrow.

 

  • She gave me a motive to study English.
  • She was the one who gave me the inspiration to study English.

 

  • She has been in Canada to study, and will come back temporarily in Japan.
  • She's been studying in Canada, but will be coming back to Japan temporarily.

 

  • She told me that, and I'll be able to meet her.
  • When she told me, I got really excited.

 

  • I'm really looking forward to the day.
  • I'm really looking forward to seeing her again.

 

  • However, my English can't improve yet although I have the intention of studying as hard as I can.
  • However, my English hasen't improve enough yet, although I have the intention of studying as hard as I can.

 

  • I can't be close to her in English and anything for good.
  • There's no way my English could be as good her's.

 

  • But I want her to recognize my growing someday.
  • I hope she think that my Japanese has improved.

 
Have fun.
Dec 09th 2011 13:36 Yuuki
Thank you always for your help.
English makes me think it difficult over and over again...

Anyway, I hope to have a good time with her, Thanks.
Dec 09th 2011 17:45 Ryan the Wired
I hope she think that my Japanese has improved.
*I hope she THINKS that my Japanese has improved.
Dec 09th 2011 17:48 Yuuki
I see. Thanks again.
Dec 09th 2011 11:46 Ryan the Wired

  • That's because tomorrow is day-off and I have an event.
  • That's because tomorrow is my day off and I have special plans.

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This sentence is better.
Dec 10th 2011 09:02 Shizukana

  • However, my English can't improve yet although I have the intention of studying as hard as I can.
  • However, my English hasn't improved yet, although I have the intend to studying as hard as I can.

 

  • I can't be close to her in English and anything for good.
  • I can't be close to her in English skills or anything else, but I want her to recognize my growth someday.Consider this: While my current English skills cannot be compared with hers, I want her to recognize my growth someday.

 
There is nothing like friends that motivate. Hope you have a really great meet-up!

Have a good weekend.
Dec 10th 2011 09:18 Yuuki
Thank you for corrections.

I can't wait for her to meet.

And have a good weekend, too!
Dec 10th 2011 09:50 Shizukana
You are most welcome.

Correction: I can't wait to meet her.

I am sure she can't wait to meet you too!

Thank you.

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