Jun30, 2009
Jun 30th 2009 11:44
About piano
Hi everyone.
Now I want to write an article about my piano and my favorite piano music.
I have learned play the piano since ten years.
I changed three teachers.
The first teacher is my drawing teacher's good friend. Whose name is 'Yili'.
She was strict in music, who didn't like us run or jump in her livingroom.
We had to clean her house in Saturday and Sunday.
Though it was tired for me, but I learned a lot of houseworks at her house.
I can help my mom doing a lot of things now.
We have a piano concert one year.
It was always in July!
Every students had to play a song on the concert.
I learned with her since eight years.
She wanted me to change a teacher because she didn't like we learned piano with the same teacher for a long time.
The second teacher is Yili's student.
She is kind and ardor.
I was very like her class.
I learned a lot of interesting songs with her.
She taught me since one year.
Teacher Yili thinks that I have to change teacher again because my second teacher can't teach me!
She said that my skill is better than my second teacher now.
So I changed a teacher again.
The third teacher is the music teacher at my school.
She is also my best friend 'Slin'.
Haha! I believe that you're still remember her!
She teaches me still now!
We always play the piano together!
My favorite composer is Chopin-the Piano Poet.
His musics is very nice!
My best is his Nocturne ii.
Wow! I love it!!!!
Hi everyone.
Now I want to write an article about my piano and my favorite piano music.
I have learned play the piano since ten years.
I changed three teachers.
The first teacher is my drawing teacher's good friend. Whose name is 'Yili'.
She was strict in music, who didn't like us run or jump in her livingroom.
We had to clean her house in Saturday and Sunday.
Though it was tired for me, but I learned a lot of houseworks at her house.
I can help my mom doing a lot of things now.
We have a piano concert one year.
It was always in July!
Every students had to play a song on the concert.
I learned with her since eight years.
She wanted me to change a teacher because she didn't like we learned piano with the same teacher for a long time.
The second teacher is Yili's student.
She is kind and ardor.
I was very like her class.
I learned a lot of interesting songs with her.
She taught me since one year.
Teacher Yili thinks that I have to change teacher again because my second teacher can't teach me!
She said that my skill is better than my second teacher now.
So I changed a teacher again.
The third teacher is the music teacher at my school.
She is also my best friend 'Slin'.
Haha! I believe that you're still remember her!
She teaches me still now!
We always play the piano together!
My favorite composer is Chopin-the Piano Poet.
His musics is very nice!
My best is his Nocturne ii.
Wow! I love it!!!!
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Jun 30th, 2009
About the piano
Hi, everyone.
Now I want to write an article about my piano and my favorite piano music.
I have been taking piano lessons for ten years.
I have had three teachers.
My first teacher was my drawing teacher's good friend.
Her name was 'Yili'.
She was strict about music, and didn't like us run or jump in her living room.
We had to clean her house on Saturdays and Sundays.
Though it was tiring work, I learned a lot about housework at her house.
I can help my mom with a lot of things now.
We had a piano concert once a year. Probably 'piano recital' is best.
Every student had to play a song at the concert.
I studied with her for eight years.
She wanted me to change teachers because she didn't like that we had studied piano with the same teacher for a long time.
My second teacher was Yili's student.
She was kind and ardor?! Ardor = sexual passion
I really liked her class.
She taught me for one year.
Teacher Yili thought that I had to change teachers again because my second teacher couldn't teach me properly!
She said that I have surpassed my second teacher now.
So I changed teachers again.
My third teacher was the music teacher at my school.
I believe that you still remember her!
She is still teaching me now!
His music is beautiful!
My favorite is his Nocturne ii.
I have been playing the piano for ten years.
I changed teachers three times.
My first teacher was my drawing teacher's good friend.
Her name is 'Yili.'
She was strict in music, and didn't like us to run or jump in her living room.
We had to clean her house on Saturday and Sunday.
Though it was tireing for me, I learned how to do housework at her house.
We have a piano concert once a year.
It is always in July!
Every students has to play a song in the concert.
I learned with her for eight years.
She wanted me to change teachers because she didn't like it that I learned with the same teacher for a long time.
My second teacher was Yili's student.
She is kind and amiable.
I liked her class very much.
She taught me for one year.
Teacher Yili thinks that I had to change teachers again because my second teacher couldn't teach me!
She said that I am better than my second teacher now.
So I changed teachers again.
My third teacher is the music teacher at my school.
She is also my best friend. Her name is 'Slin.'
I believe that you'll remember her!
She still teaches me now!
His music is very nice!
My favorite is his Nocturne ii.
That's a lot of changing teachers.
I've been taking piano for two years and haven't changed yet.
She's very good, so I don't think I'll ever have to change. :)
Now I want to write an entry (or "a journal entry") about my piano and my favorite piano music. -- "An article" is more formal, such as something you write for homework or a newspaper. In most blogs/online journals, you would say "entry."
Her name was 'Yili'. -- "Was" is better because even if she's still alive, you don't know her anymore, so stay with past tense.
She was strict in music, and didn't like us running or jumping in her living room. -- No comma needed.
We had to clean her house in Saturdays and Sundays. -- Plural because you did it all the time, not just once.