my feeling

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Jan 25th 2009 16:06 feeling

today it was said a happy day ,the old people always said the new near is coming now ,we enjoyed celebreting the happy day .but to me ,i didn't feel very happy .
maybe ,i have experienced so many new year ,,or have something made me sad ~
i have heared my english teacher wouidn't teach us ,it was a shoke to me ,she was always kind to us ,espercially she was the excellentest teacher in my college,so ,without her help ,i feel very worried ,even i lost the enthusiasm of learning english ,
oh ,how bad my life it is ~~~~

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Jan 25th 2009 16:40 Liren

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my feeling
My Feelings This is a title, so capitalize it. "To feel" in noun form is "feelings" and not "feeling"

today it was said a happy day ,the old people always said the new near is coming now ,we enjoyed celebreting the happy day .but to me ,i didn't feel very happy .
Everyone says today it was said is a happy day. The old people always said say "the new near is coming now and we enjoyed celebreting enjoy celebrating the happy day." But to me I don't feel very happy. Because you are talking about today, your verbs should be in the present tense.

maybe ,i have experienced so many new year ,,or have something made me sad ~
maybe i have experienced so too many new years...or have something made me sad ~

i have heared my english teacher wouidn't teach us ,it was a shoke to me ,she was always kind to us ,espercially she was the excellentest teacher in my college,so ,without her help ,i feel very worried ,even i lost the enthusiasm of learning english ,
i have heard my english teacher wouldn't teach us. it was a shock to me since she was always kind to us, especially since she was the excellentest most excellent teacher in my college. Without her help, i feel very worried and I even lost the my enthusiasm of for learning english.