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The third time of class closing

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of yuka-p's latest journal entries Dec 09th 2009 18:41
It has been a long time since I posted last journal.
Recently I had been so busy with my work, taking care of my children who suffered H1N1 flu and so on.

The number of flu patient is increasing day by day in our region.
My youngest daughter’s class closed twice so far and another period of closing is to start from tomorrow again for one week due to the outbreak. She suffered the flu between the down periods. The pediatric clinic that we usually go to was packed with the patients. So we had to go another clinic. The symptom was not so serious than what the media have been saying.

I think that it is necessary to be absent from school when you come down with the flu, but closing the class is really needed? The city’s fiat is that when we have 2 patients of the H1N1 in our class, we have to close though it was changed to 4 patients as its outbreaks dramatically spread few days ago. Much more second time around or third time around?

For kindergarten kids, they can’t stay alone at home while their parents working daytime. How do full-time working mothers handle this situation? Even for me, part-time teacher working once a week, I had to ask my mother to take care of her or bring her to nursery specialized for sick children. I can imagine that it is so much stressful for full time working mothers.

With this spreading speed, I think it seems most human have to come down with the flu.
Take care of yourself.
Dec 11th 2009 03:52 Exis Night

  • It has been a long time since I posted last journal.
  • It has been a long time since I last posted to my journal.
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  • Recently I had been so busy with my work, taking care of my children who suffered H1N1 flu and so on.
  • Recently I have been so busy with work, taking care of my children who came down with the H1N1 flu and so on.
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  • The number of flu patient is increasing day by day in our region.
  • The number of flu patient is increasing daily in our region.
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  • My youngest daughter’s class closed twice so far and another period of closing is to start from tomorrow again for one week due to the outbreak.
  • My youngest daughter’s class was suspended twice so far and another period of closing is to start from tomorrow again for one week due to the outbreak.
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  • She suffered the flu between the down periods.
  • She came down with the flu between the down periods.
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  • The pediatric clinic that we usually go to was packed with the patients.
  • The pediatric clinic that we usually go to was packed with the patients,
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  • So we had to go another clinic.
  • so we had to go another clinic. (Connected with previous sentence.)
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  • The symptom was not so serious than what the media have been saying.
  • The symptoms weren't as serious as the media had been saying.
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  • I think that it is necessary to be absent from school when you come down with the flu, but closing the class is really needed?
  • I think that it is necessary to be absent from school when you come down with the flu, but is suspending class really needed?
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  • The city’s fiat is that when we have 2 patients of the H1N1 in our class, we have to close though it was changed to 4 patients as its outbreaks dramatically spread few days ago.
  • The city’s fiat is that if there are 2 H1N1 patients in a class, we have to shut it down, though the number was changed to 4 patients as the outbreaks had dramatically spread a few days ago.
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  • Much more second time around or third time around?
  • Will there be even more infections the second or third time around?
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  • For kindergarten kids, they can’t stay alone at home while their parents working daytime.
  • For kindergarten kids, they can’t stay alone at home while their parents are working.
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  • Even for me, part-time teacher working once a week, I had to ask my mother to take care of her or bring her to nursery specialized for sick children.
  • Even I, a part-time teacher working only once a week, had to ask my mother to take care of my daughter, or take her to a nursery specialized for sick children.
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  • I can imagine that it is so much stressful for full time working mothers.
  • I can imagine that it is so much more stressful for full time working mothers.
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  • With this spreading speed, I think it seems most human have to come down with the flu.
  • With the speed at which it's spreading, I think it seems as if most humans have come down with the flu.
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Sounds rough. H1N1 has been making the rounds over here as well, but it seems to be leveling off now since I haven't heard of any new school closings in some time.
Dec 11th 2009 19:06 yuka-p

Hi! Exis Night!
Thank you very much for correcting my journal which is full of mistakes.
I am really glad that you found my post and checked it.
I need to study much more grammar.

Hope to talk with you on Skype someday soon.
yuka-p
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