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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Mizuho's latest journal entries Jan 14th 2009 00:49 schedule mistake correct say shooting wrong
I called many people at work today.
And I made some mistakes.
First, I couldn't say that Shooting day is one of these days from Jan 27th to Jan 30th. (I said "Shooting day is one day shooting during Jan 27th to 30th./Shooting day is one day shooting from Jan 27th to 30th)
Next, I said "Please scratch off you schedule tomorrow."

Do they make sense?
If it doesn't, could you give me correct sentences?


今日の失敗
今日は仕事で、たくさんの人に電話をかけました。
そして、いくつかミスをしました。
まず、「撮影日は1月27日から30日のうち、どれか1日です」と言えませんでした。
次に、「明日のスケジュールははずしておいてください」というのもちゃんと言えなかった気がします。

私が言った文で意味は通じますか?
もし意味をなさないなら、なんと言えばよかったですか?
Jan 14th 2009 02:16 王っさん

  • First, I couldn't say that Shooting day is one of these days from Jan 27th to Jan 30th.
  • First, I couldn't say that the shooting day is one of the days between Jan 27th and Jan 30th.
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  • Do they make sense?
  • Do those make sense?
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  • If it doesn't, could you give me correct sentences?
  • If they don't, could you give me correct sentences?
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How about, "shooting day will be somewhere between the 27th and the 30th of January" "Please scratch it off tomorrow's schedule"
Jan 14th 2009 02:54 April

  • Next, I said "Please scratch off you schedule tomorrow."
  • Next, I said "Please scratch it off your schedule tomorrow."
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  • Do they make sense?
  • Does this make sense?
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  • If it doesn't, could you give me correct sentences?
  • If it doesn't, could you give me correct my sentences?
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Jan 14th 2009 06:49 Mizuho

王っさんsan、April-san
Thank you for always giving me answer!!
I'm using those at work, so this is a big help. Thank you so much!

いつもありがとうございます!
仕事で使う言葉なので、とても助かります。本当にありがとう!
Mizuho
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