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i turned on the tv when i woke up this morning.
i saw something awful ....
one man has killed nealy 100 ppl. cant believe it and i became sad..
i dont understand terrorism or wars.. there are many ways to solve problems..
crazy world
well im glad my friend who lives in norway is ok.
i saw something awful ....
one man has killed nealy 100 ppl. cant believe it and i became sad..
i dont understand terrorism or wars.. there are many ways to solve problems..
crazy world
well im glad my friend who lives in norway is ok.
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when i woke up this morning i turned on the tv
one man had killed nearly 100 people.
i couldn't believe it i became sad..
very sad !! >_< i am norwegian is very sad to see happen to them ! glad friend is ok !!
cant believe it and i became sad..I couldn't believe it, it upset me.
there are many ways to solve problems..There are many other ways to solve problems.
I think you should word your sentences differently.
In the sentence I corrected first you use both present and paste tense, you wrote'Can't believe it and I became sad' which isn't very good grammar (no offence to you at all :P). My correction changes the sentence to past tense with 'I couldn't believe it' and changed 'i became sad' to 'It upset me' this is both grammatically correct and just sounds better in the sentence.
For my second correction I've just added the word other 'There are many other ways to solve problems' sounds a lot better and has a clearer meaning that 'there are many ways to solve problems' which sort of sounds a little vague if you ask me.
Hope that helped, feel free to ask any questions.
Keep the English up you seem to be doing well :)
(PS avoid text language like 'ppl' because it's just the lazy way :P)