Autumn color

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It is the best season to view the autumn leaves in Tokyo now.
I went to the Ginkgo festival at Aoyama on my day off.
The ginkgo tree along Gaien Street is one of the most famous sights.
Every year,various people come to see this beautiful yellow leaves.
They were enjoying taking a photo, walking under the tree and picking up a leaf.

Aoyama is well known for fancy cafes,too.
Some people had a tea break just in front of the gorgeous yelow carpet.
I also went into a cafe for brunch, but I refrained from sitting on the a patio seat.
It was a little cold to eat outside. I ordered salad plate and I liked it.
It is the last day in November today. Onset of a full-fledged winter is coming soon.
Nov 30th 2010 15:14 Yosei

  • Every year,various people come to see this beautiful yellow leaves.
  • Every year,various people come to see this these beautiful yellow leaves.

 

  • Aoyama is well known for fancy cafes,too.
  • Aoyama is well known for its fancy cafes,too.

 

  • I also went into a cafe for brunch, but I refrained from sitting on the a patio seat.
  • I also went into a cafe for brunch, but I refrained from sitting on the a patio seat.

 

  • It was a little cold to eat outside.
  • It was a little too cold to eat outside.

 

  • I ordered salad plate and I liked it.
  • I ordered the/a salad plate and I liked it.

 
You were only missing a few tiny words, but nothing big that made a difference. I still understood everything (I wish I could see the leaves there!!!) and, as a matter of fact, these small mistakes would normally be overlooked. But, I figured it would be best to make your English as perfect as possible. Wonderfully written, keep it up! ^o^
Jan 11th 2011 16:38 パク
THANK YOU!!!

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