New Year Shift

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Happy new year!
I can`t believe still now that 2010 has already gone,but the calendar says it is 2011 now.
How did you spend the moment of turning new year?

As for me,it was one of the worst day in my life.
I worked the night shift at my hotel on 30th November.
It was just tragedy to work during the new year holiday season.
I gazed with jealous eyes to poeple enjoying their holidays.
Besides, I had a 38 degree fever, sore throat and felt sick.
I tried to pritend to be fine, but I couldn`t control runny nose.
When a guest came to the front desk,I bowed down my greeting as usual.
But I felt something wrong. I bent down my head at first and I saw something fell in drops on the front counter!
It was the top seacret between the guest and me.

On the next early morning,New Year's Eve,I made one of the biggest mistake since I began to work at this hotel.
It was totally because of me,so I became deflated about it.
I got fed up with myself, New year and everything.
At that time,reception phone rang wildly. I answered the phone on the first ring and asked how could I help her.
She said,"My husband got sick and vomit on the bed. Could you bring some medicine and change the bedclothes?"
I answered,"Sure.I`ll be with you in a moment,ma'am".
On the way to the room with new sheet and medicine,I asked again and again.
"Jesus,did I do anything bad?" and "The person who desire medicine is here!"

When I got home after the busy night, my mom prepared the fancy meal for the New Year. I felt sorry for her,but I couldn`t eat them at all because I was too tired and felt bad. I flied myself down on the bed and slept until the first morning of the new year. That`s why I didn`t remenber the moment of turning new year.

It was certain that this new year was awful day, but I realized that I could tell it as funny story now.
My friends enjoyed this story and laughed to tears at the part of bearing off my contagious vomiting to smell the stuff on the bed.
I`m satisfied with that. The worst New Year day could only go so far.
Jan 11th 2011 06:48 laundress

  • I can`t believe still now that 2010 has already gone,but the calendar says it is 2011 now.
  • I still can`t believe still now that 2010 has already gone,but the calendar says and that it is 2011 now.

 

  • How did you spend the moment of turning new year?
  • How did you spend the moment of turning new year?What did you do when the clock struck midnight?

 

  • As for me,it was one of the worst day in my life.
  • As for me,it was one of the worst days in of my life.

 

  • I worked the night shift at my hotel on 30th November.
  • I worked the night shift at my hotel on 30th November 30th.

 

  • It was just tragedy to work during the new year holiday season.
  • It was just tragedy tragic to work during the new year holiday season.

 

  • I gazed with jealous eyes to poeple enjoying their holidays.
  • I gazed with jealous eyes to jealously at poeple people enjoying their holidays.

 

  • I tried to pritend to be fine, but I couldn`t control runny nose.
  • I tried to pritend pretend to be fine, but I couldn`t control my runny nose.

 

  • When a guest came to the front desk,I bowed down my greeting as usual.
  • When a guest came to the front desk,I bowed down my greeting as usual.

 

  • But I felt something wrong.
  • But I felt something something felt wrong.

 

  • I bent down my head at first and I saw something fell in drops on the front counter!
  • When I bent down, my head at first and I saw something fall fell in drops on the front counter!

 

  • It was the top seacret between the guest and me.
  • It was the top seacret secret between the guest and me.

 

  • On the next early morning,New Year's Eve,I made one of the biggest mistake since I began to work at this hotel.
  • Early the next morning, on On the next early morning,New Year's Eve,I made one of the biggest mistakes since I began to working at this hotel.

 

  • It was totally because of me,so I became deflated about it.
  • It was totally because of me,so I became deflated depressed about it.

 

  • At that time,reception phone rang wildly.
  • At that time, the reception phone rang wildly.

 

  • She said,"My husband got sick and vomit on the bed.
  • She said,"My husband got sick and vomited on the bed.

 

  • On the way to the room with new sheet and medicine,I asked again and again.
  • On the way to the room with new sheets and medicine,I asked again and again.

 

  • "Jesus,did I do anything bad?" and "The person who desire medicine is here!"
  • "Jesus,did I do anything bad?" and "The person who desire needs medicine is here!"

 

  • When I got home after the busy night, my mom prepared the fancy meal for the New Year.
  • When I got home after the busy night, my mom prepared the a fancy meal for the New Year.

 

  • I felt sorry for her,but I couldn`t eat them at all because I was too tired and felt bad.
  • I felt sorry for her,but I couldn`t eat them at all because I was too tired and felt bad.

 

  • I flied myself down on the bed and slept until the first morning of the new year.
  • I flied myself down on the bed and slept until the first morning of the new year.

 

  • That`s why I didn`t remenber the moment of turning new year.
  • That`s why I didn`t remenber the moment of turning it became the new year.

 

  • It was certain that this new year was awful day, but I realized that I could tell it as funny story now.
  • It was certain that this new year was an awful day, but I realized that I could tell it as funny story now.

 
Great job! I only had a few minor corrections to improve the overal phrasing. Everything was very clear and I really enjoyed the story.

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