Canada

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of aya's latest journal entries Apr 29th 2010 17:09
I went to Toronto in Canada for 3 weeks and to NY for a week.

This abroad was so fantastic because I could make a lot of friends who foreign people!!

Now I'm working in Japan as a computer programmer but I really want to go Canada again someday.
I will earn money enough to go to Canada for a few years.

I like English. I REALLY want to be person who can speak English.
I like English sound. I'm so satisfied to even listen English.

I live in Japan and work all the day everyday but I have to study English.
It's a little bit difficult for me but I will do my best.


Apr 29th 2010 17:33 k.rma

  • This abroad was so fantastic because I could make a lot of friends who foreign people!!
  • This trip abroad was so fantastic because I was able make a lot of foreign friends who foreign people!! 「"could" → "was able" -- Since the trip was in the past, you're talking about what happened instead of what could happen.」

 

  • Now I'm working in Japan as a computer programmer but I really want to go Canada again someday.
  • Now I'm working in Japan as a computer programmer but I really want to go to Canada again someday.

 

  • I will earn money enough to go to Canada for a few years.
  • I will earn enough money enough to go to Canada (again) for a few years.

 

  • I like English sound.
  • I like the English sound.

 

  • I'm so satisfied to even listen English.
  • Listening to English is enough to satisfy me.

 

  • I live in Japan and work all the day everyday but I have to study English.
  • I live in Japan and work all the day everyday but I have to study English.

 

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