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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of LadyPhantomhive's latest journal entries May 23rd 2011 15:26
So, not sure what to write first...

そこで、まず何を書くべきかわからない...

不安定な,不確実な...

>.<

Errr...
Ano...

May 23rd 2011 15:31 binji
  • Japanese
  • Dutch

  • First Entry

  • First Entryはじめての日記

 
  • そこで、まず何を書くべきかわからない...

  • そこでさて、まず何を書くべきかわからない...

 
  • 不安定な,不確実な...

  • なんとも不安定なで,、不確実な...

 
  • Errr...

  • Errrうーん...

 
  • Ano...

  • Anoあのう...

 
はじめまして。
よろしくお願（ねが）いします。

○「そこで」は、文章（ぶんしょう）の間（あいだ）でつなぐことばです。
文章のはじめには使（つか）いません。

○「、」と「,」をまぜて使ってはいけません。
「、」にしておきました。
May 23rd 2011 15:34 yuki
  • Japanese
  • English , German

  • そこで、まず何を書くべきかわからない...

  • そこで、まず何を書くべきかわからない...

 
  • 不安定な,不確実な...

  • 不安定な,で不確実な（私の）感じor気持ち...

 
はじめまして。
書きたいことを書くといいですよ。
（といいつつ私もなかなかできてませんが）
I recommend you to write short sentence(s) first.
ex. going to shopping or what you like, etc. :)
May 27th 2011 05:07 LadyPhantomhive
Thank you, yuki! :) I will do that and will keep doing my best :)
May 24th 2011 13:40 Masako
  • Japanese
  • English

Come-on! You can do it! I'm looking forward to reading your second diary!
May 27th 2011 05:05 LadyPhantomhive
Haha, you are too nice. I will keep on trying. I will absolutely do my best, even if my best doesn't mean much :)
May 25th 2011 13:04 Sho
  • Japanese
  • English

Could be anything. You can write about what you did today, what you saw or heard, how the weather was, what you're interested in, and so on. Keep writing!
May 27th 2011 05:06 LadyPhantomhive
Because I am still such a newbie, I want to keep it simple until I can understand the complexities of the grammar and structure. Having studied English in university, I really want to get a grasp on it all and so being "new" to a language is almost unsettling, but I will absolutely do my best :) Thank you!
May 27th 2011 05:31 LadyPhantomhive
  • English
  • Japanese , Korean

thank you all for your comments and corrections! I actually was afraid to read them all for fear of how bad it was going to be- but you were all so friendly so thank you! :) I will keep trying!

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