Birthday

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of KERO's latest journal entries Jan 15th 2009 22:52 family
I have four children: two sons and two daughters. Today is my first
son’s birthday. He is 6 years old now. January 18th is my second
daughter’s birthday. She will be 8 years old. So we are in the
middle of birthday-week of my family.
A few years ago, we spent a whole day shopping the presents
for them. But this year, we ordered them from Amazon. com
through the Internet and we had them delivered yesterday.
Furthermore, we ordered the birthday cakes at a convenience
store in the neighborhood. It is very convenient.
Both of them wanted the software of video games. I gave them
what they wanted. They were pleased with the presents very much
and played them until eleven o’clock last night. As a parent,
however, I am worried a little. Will they spend too much time
playing games? Aren’t the video games bad for their eyes? I
hope they will want something else next year, such as a bat and
a glove for baseball or heart-warming books.
Jan 15th 2009 23:14 gothic.quincy

  • Today is my first
  • Today is my oldest

 

  • January 18th is my second
  • January 18th is my oldest

 

  • daughter’s birthday.
  • daughter’s birthday. (she is the 2nd children, but she is the oldest daughter you have.)

 

  • A few years ago, we spent a whole day shopping the presents
  • A few years ago, we spent a whole day to buy some presents

 

  • Furthermore, we ordered the birthday cakes at a convenience
  • Furthermore, we ordered the birthday cakes at a convenience

 

  • Both of them wanted the software of video games.
  • Both of them wanted video games' software.

 

  • hope they will want something else next year, such as a bat and
  • hope they will want something else next year, such as a bat and

 
Congratulation for your children anniversary...
I wish you could give the best things for them...
Jan 16th 2009 00:41 bon

  • Today is my first
  • Today is my oldest

 

  • middle of birthday-week of my family.
  • middle of a birthday-week for my family.

 

  • A few years ago, we spent a whole day shopping the presents
  • A few years ago, we spent a whole day shopping for presents

 

  • and played them until eleven o’clock last night.
  • and played with them until eleven o’clock last night.

 

  • however, I am worried a little.
  • however, I am a little worried.

 

  • a glove for baseball or heart-warming books.
  • a glove for baseball or some heart-warming books.

 
I agree with you, it's important that they don't play on their consoles all day long. It's bad for their eyes and their health.
Jan 16th 2009 07:42 Bah_Dure

  • She will be 8 years old.
  • She will be 8 years old then.

 

  • middle of birthday-week of my family.
  • middle of my family's birthday-week.(sound's better.)

 

  • A few years ago, we spent a whole day shopping the presents
  • A few years ago, we spent a whole day shopping for the presents.

 

  • for them.
  • for them.

 

  • through the Internet and we had them delivered yesterday.
  • by the Internet and they were delivered yesterday.

 

  • Both of them wanted the software of video games.
  • Both of them wanted video games.

 

  • They were pleased with the presents very much
  • They were very pleased with the presents

 

  • Aren’t the video games bad for their eyes?
  • Aren’t video games bad for their eyes?

 
Keroさんはとっても親切お父さん!^_^
(You're a good dad Kero!!)

今日は日記を読むことが楽しかったです。がんばってください!:D
(I really liked reading your diary today. Please keep on posting!)

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