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Jul 14th 2012 16:23
I didn't enroll the university.
When I was young, I was not interesting the university.
But, I want to get a graduate CERT(certificate) of the university now.
This university has the very many majors.
For example, English, Franch Spanish, Korean, and German.
Therefor I'll enroll before Internet university, I have to get several languages exam certificates.
in addition, I'll saving a money that is enroll fee.
In the end, I'll enroll Internet university.
I don't understand that I'll spend how many years.
V
Thank you for your correction!
Jul 14th 2012 16:34
  • I didn't enroll the university.

  • I didn't enroll the go to university.

 
  • When I was young, I was not interesting the university.

  • When I was young, I was not interesting the in going to university.

 
  • But, I want to get a graduate CERT(certificate) of the university now.

  • But, I want to get a university graduate CERT(certificate) of the university now.

 
  • This university has the very many majors.

  • This university has the very many majors.

 
  • Therefor I'll enroll before Internet university, I have to get several languages exam certificates.

  • Therefore before I'll enroll before with the Internet university, I have to get several languages exam certificates.

 
  • in addition, I'll saving a money that is enroll fee.

  • In addition, I'll saveing a money that is for the enrollment fee.

 
  • In the end, I'll enroll Internet university.

  • In the end, I'll enroll at Internet university.

 
  • I don't understand that I'll spend how many years.

  • I don't understand that I'll spend how many years it will take.

 
ひでさんの勉強するの夢に頑張ってください！　私も外国語の勉強で頑張ります！
Jul 14th 2012 16:49 Hide
ありがとうございます。Your correcting is very useful.
Jul 14th 2012 16:51 Hide
Good Luck for your studing of forerign languages.
Jul 14th 2012 18:09 V
“

  • When I was young, I was not interesting the in going to university.

”
"interesting" --> "interested" [sorry, missed this first time]
Jul 14th 2012 18:10 V
“

  • Therefore before I'll enroll before with the Internet university, I have to get several languages exam certificates.

”
"Therefore before I enroll with the Internet university...."
V
Thank you for your correction!
Jul 14th 2012 16:37
  • I don't understand that I'll spend how many years.

  • I don't understand that I'll spend know how many years it will take.

    前に送って直した文で間違いましたね！　ごめんなさい。。。　「know」が必要です。

 
bradleyfera
Thank you for your correction!
Jul 14th 2012 17:14
  • When I was young, I was not interesting the university.

  • When I was young, I was not interested in going to university.

 
  • This university has the very many majors.

  • This university has the very many majors.

 
  • Therefor I'll enroll before Internet university, I have to get several languages exam certificates.

  • Therefore, before I enroll with the Internet university, I have to get several languages exam certificates.

 
  • in addition, I'll saving a money that is enroll fee.

  • In addition, I'll save money on the enrollment fee.

 
There were a number of errors in V´s corrections.
Jul 14th 2012 18:07 V
“

  • Therefore, before I enroll with the Internet university, I have to get several languages exam certificates.

”
languages --> language [plural is not required here, as it is already applied to "certificates"]
Jul 14th 2012 18:08 V
“

  • This university has the very many majors.

”
--> "This university has many majors." [Article "the" is not required here as majors is plural.]
Jul 14th 2012 21:26 Hide
Thank you very much for the correcting my journal.
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