This is my first diary in LANG-8.

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of cosuke_yszm's latest journal entries Feb 20th 2009 08:15 study english f1
My favorite hobby is about Formula One. I had been to Singapore
for wacthing the first night race in the history. It was quite a exicite
and remarkable experience. I would like to enter into the business
in Formula One in the future.

Recently my brother had started to study English.
He said that he was inspired by me. We thought this is the
good opportunity for us to make a competition in studying English.

It's a tough and long work to learn English everyday. Despite of three
years Ihad studied English , I actually feel a difficulty with it.
Feb 20th 2009 09:34 Lucille

  • My favorite hobby is about Formula One.
  • My favorite hobby is about Formula One. I have a keen interest in Formula One. Or simply I love Formula One.

 

  • I had been to Singapore
  • I had been to Singapore I have been to Singapore

 

  • for wacthing the first night race in the history.
  • for wacthing the first night race in the history. to watch the first ever night race.

 

  • It was quite a exicite
  • It was quite a exicite an exciteable

 

  • in Formula One in the future.
  • in Formula One in the future. of

 

  • Recently my brother had started to study English.
  • Recently my brother had started to study English.

 

  • He said that he was inspired by me.
  • He said that he was inspired by me. I inspired him

 

  • We thought this is the
  • We thought this is the it would be

 

  • good opportunity for us to make a competition in studying English.
  • good opportunity for us to make a competition in studying English. a good opportunity for us to compete through studying English

 

  • It's a tough and long work to learn English everyday.
  • It's a tough and long work to learn English everyday.long, hard work to study English every day.

 

  • Despite of three
  • Despite of three the

 

  • years Ihad studied English , I actually feel a difficulty with it.
  • years Ihad studied English , I actually feel a difficulty with it. years I've studied English, I still find it very difficult.

 
Hope that helps! you're grammar is excellent, you maybe have to work a little on your vocabularly- choosing the right words for certain phrases!
Keep up the good work

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