Composition Practice2 (Please Correct Errors)

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Jul 17, 2011 18:45
Subject; "Some people say that they cannot live without a cellular phone today. Are you for or against this opinion?"



I agree with this opinion. It is true that twenty years ago, there were few people who were using a cellular phone. But today, it is necessary for our lives because we use it not only personally but also on business.That means a cellular phone is a part of our lives. Thus, I think that we cannot live without this useful device.
Li
Jul 17, 2011 19:03
  • I agree with this opinion.

  • I agree with this opinion (statement).

 
  • That means a cellular phone is a part of our lives.

  • That means a cellular phone is (becomes) a part of our lives.

 

Good Job!

Jul 17, 2011 20:47 Keisuke
Thanks for correcting.
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