Please correct my grammars
Feb 09th 2009 20:34
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Do you agree with the death penalty ??
I think that the death penalty should never be used.
Some people that the death penalty is the final way we can punish muders.
However,The way we punish them by the death penalty doesn't lead to solutions at all.
The reason why I think so is that there is nothing taking surviors in account.
Suviors must want muders to reflect their cruel actions .
Therefore, the death penalty is not importance for us.
I think that the death penalty should never be used.
Some people that the death penalty is the final way we can punish muders.
However,The way we punish them by the death penalty doesn't lead to solutions at all.
The reason why I think so is that there is nothing taking surviors in account.
Suviors must want muders to reflect their cruel actions .
Therefore, the death penalty is not importance for us.
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Please correct my grammars
Some people think that the death penalty is the final way we can punish murderers.
However, punishing them with the death penalty doesn't lead a solution at all.
The reason why I think so is that there is nothing taking surviors into account.
Suviors must want muders to reflect on their cruel actions .
Therefore, the death penalty is not important for us.
Some people think that the death penalty is the best way to punish murderers.
However, The death penalty isn't a solution at all.
I think so because survivors are not taken into account.
Survivors must want murderers to live so they can reflect on their cruel actions .
Therefore, the death penalty is not a proper solution for us.
死刑はとても問題劇(controversial)ですね。
頑張ってます！
では、
ラリー
毎回ありがとうございます！
それにしても僕は簡単な間違いが多すぎですね；；
次は、ちゃんと確認して書き込みますね！
ラリーさん
文法だけでなく、内容がとりやす英語に直してもらうと納得ができます！
話は変わりますが、日本語が本当にお上手ですね：）