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I am job hunting now.
It's not so easy for me to make it.
But if I'm getting older, it's more difficult.
And I have to get a new job until the end of this year.
I think working is for salary or worth doing.
Both of them are not good enough in my current job.
So please collect my resume!!
<Skills/Qualifications>
More than five years experiences in fashion industry.
Considerable experiences in snowboarding in New Zealand, Canada and Japan from 2003 to 2007.
Extensive knowledge of snowboarding.
Fluent in English and Japanese.
Cheerful, positive, self-starter, well organized, and tactful.
Polite and pleasant business manner.
Able to work as a part of a team.
A lot of experience of sports.
(Snowboard, Surf, Wakeboard, Skateboard, Swimming, Scuba, Soccer, Futsal, Gymnastic and more)
TOEIC (Test Of English for International Communication): 770 points in July 2011.
Canadian Association of Snowboard instructors: Level 1 in February 2004.
PADI Openwater Diver License: August 2001.
Good skills of sewing machines.
Able to make simple patterns for clothes and equipments.(Caps, bags and more)
to be continued...
It's not so easy for me to make it.
But if I'm getting older, it's more difficult.
And I have to get a new job until the end of this year.
I think working is for salary or worth doing.
Both of them are not good enough in my current job.
So please collect my resume!!
<Skills/Qualifications>
More than five years experiences in fashion industry.
Considerable experiences in snowboarding in New Zealand, Canada and Japan from 2003 to 2007.
Extensive knowledge of snowboarding.
Fluent in English and Japanese.
Cheerful, positive, self-starter, well organized, and tactful.
Polite and pleasant business manner.
Able to work as a part of a team.
A lot of experience of sports.
(Snowboard, Surf, Wakeboard, Skateboard, Swimming, Scuba, Soccer, Futsal, Gymnastic and more)
TOEIC (Test Of English for International Communication): 770 points in July 2011.
Canadian Association of Snowboard instructors: Level 1 in February 2004.
PADI Openwater Diver License: August 2001.
Good skills of sewing machines.
Able to make simple patterns for clothes and equipments.(Caps, bags and more)
to be continued...
It's not so easy for me to make it.
As I'm getting older, it's more difficult.
And I have to get a new job before the end of this year.
I think people work (either) to earn a salary or (just) because it's something worth doing.
Neither of these are not good enough in my current job.
So please correct my resume!!
More than five years of experience in the fashion industry.
Considerable experience in snowboarding in New Zealand, Canada and Japan from 2003 to 2007.
Fluent in (both) English and Japanese. <--- You don't need to add 'both' but it sounds a little better with it in.
Able to work (well) as a part of a team. <--- Again, 'well' isn't needed but it sounds a little better with it in.
A lot of experience of sports. <--- This is perfect!! An alternative wording could be: 'A great deal of experience of various sports.'
(Snowboard, Surf, Wakeboard, Skateboard, Swimming, Scuba, Soccer, Futsal, Gymnastic and more) <--- You could join this to the previous sentence like this: 'A great deal of experience of various sports such as snowboarding, surfing, wakeboarding, skateboarding, swimming, scuba diving, soccer, futsal, gymnastics and (many) more.' If you want to you could use the word 'including' instead of 'such as', they are both acceptable.
Canadian Association of Snowboard Instructors: Level 1 in February 2004.
Good skills of sewing machines. ---> Here are a few different ways that you could say this: 'Good sewing machine skills.' .... 'Very capable with a sewing machine.' ... 'Very good understanding of and skill with a sewing machine.' ... I think you must be better than good so don't be afraid to use 'very good'.
Able to make simple patterns for clothing and equipment.(Caps, bags and more) ---> I think a better phrasing would be 'clothing and accessories'. Again, you can join this up to make a longer sentence: 'Able to make simple patterns for clothing and accessories such as caps, bags and (many) more.'
I hope you will be able to get a job that you enjoy and that pays well! That must be something everybody wishes for. Good luck!! ^^
I'll do my best!!
It's not so very easy for me to be hired make it.
But if As I'm getting older, it's becoming more difficult.
And I have to get a new job until before the end of this year.
I think working is for salary or worth doing. -Or "I think people should work at their job because they get a good salary or because their job is something they feel is worth doing" maybe?
Both of them are not good enough I do not have either of these in at my current job.
So please collect correct my resume!! -This sentence does not really connect with your previous sentence. Maybe you could have added something like: "Therefore, I am looking for a new job!"
More than five years of experiences in the fashion industry.
Considerable experiences in snowboarding in New Zealand, Canada and Japan from 2003 to 2007.
A lot of experience of with sports.
(Snowboarding, surfing, wakeboarding, skateboarding, swimming, scuba diving, playing soccer, futsal, doing gymnastics and more)
Canadian Association of Snowboard Instructors: Level 1 in February 2004.