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Nov 09th 2011 00:14 Fashion
I went to Halloween party in SHIBUYA end of October.
My friend invited me it at the day before the night.（前日の夜に）
I hadn't dressed for Halloween before, so I had no costume then.
I went to ドンキホーテ to buy something in a hurry.
I bought a Halloween ガチャピン.

I met Darth Maul there!!
He was smoking and drinking...
It was a good party :)

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I want to change my above sentence, because most of mine are beginning "I"
It looks not very nice...
narie
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Nov 09th 2011 05:55
  • I went to Halloween party in SHIBUYA end of October.

  • I went to Halloween party in SHIBUYA at the end of October.

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  • My friend invited me it at the day before the night.（前日の夜に）

  • My friend invited me to it the night before.（前日の夜に）

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • I hadn't dressed for Halloween before, so I had no costume then.

  • I hadn't dressed up for Halloween before, so I have had no costume then.

 
  • I went to ドンキホーテ to buy something in a hurry.

  • In a hurry I went to ドンキホーテ to buy something.

 
  • I want to change my above sentence, because most of mine are beginning "I"

  • I want to change my the above sentences, because most of mine them are beginning with "I"

 
Halloween Gachapin? omg ww ガチャピン可愛いですけどね　
it looks ok even if your senences begin with "I"
Nov 09th 2011 21:54 taxi
Thanks!
Do you know ガチャピン is not a flog?
Nov 09th 2011 22:06 narie
Yes! He's a dinosaur, isn't he? ^^
Nov 09th 2011 22:29 taxi
Yeah!! You knew it :)
He is worried about it, haha.
「ぼくは、青虫じゃないよ。カエルでもないよ」
http://gachapin.fujitvkidsclub.jp/
AylesC
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Nov 09th 2011 09:19
  • I hadn't dressed for Halloween before, so I had no costume then.

  • I hadn't dressed up for Halloween before, so I had no didn't have a costume then.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • I want to change my above sentence, because most of mine are beginning "I"

  • I want to change my the above sentences, because most of mine are beginning with "I".

 
  • It looks not very nice...

  • It doesn't looks not very nice...

 
楽しいそう！

I think beginning many of your sentences with "I" looks ok too.
Nov 09th 2011 21:56 taxi
Thanks!
とても楽しかったよ♪
Nov 12th 2011 09:21
はいはい、いいですよ。英語は日本語ではありません。
「俺」とたかさんが方がいいです。
ガチャピンは何ですか？
Nov 12th 2011 11:21 taxi
ひさしぶりー！
ガチャピンは恐竜（dinosaur）だよ。
Nov 12th 2011 14:05
はい、お久しぶりデス！俺は少し忙しかった勉強しました。すぐ話しましょうか？って、ガチャピンはスターワーズからですか？見ましたと思う。
Nov 12th 2011 16:11 taxi
ガチャピンはヨーダじゃなくて日本のTVキャラクターだよ！
http://gachapin.fujitvkidsclub.jp/
Nov 12th 2011 21:45
あ、そう～。分かりました、可愛いですね？
Nov 13th 2011 00:13 taxi
Yep! kind of cute.
Kyndrill
Nov 21st 2011 15:02
  • I went to Halloween party in SHIBUYA end of October.

  • I went to a Halloween party in SHIBUYA at the end of October.

 
I agree, it's no problem to use so many I's ^^
Did you enjoy dressing up for Halloween? I didn't go to a Halloween party this year :(
Nov 21st 2011 20:55 taxi
I enjoyed it.
But I don't remember most of the night because of alcohol...
mr.dinosaur
Feb 04th 2012 19:09
XDD You make a cool Darth Maul!! I was a zombie pirate for Halloween~
Feb 05th 2012 14:20 taxi
Yeah!! I wanna see that :)
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