explain the theology philosophically

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Jun 13, 2012 16:40
I heard that many American young people intend not to believe the God.
Do they only often doubt a particular dogma, or don't they believe the existence of the God?

I think that churches or theologians had better explain the theology philosophically.
The Christian theology is very well made.

Only particular dogmas by particular religionists aren't Chiristian theology.
It allows each individual to philosophically think over the truth,the good and the beauty.

Or many churches may be afraid of being scattered by thoughts of each individuals,
Rena
Thank you for your correction!
Jun 13, 2012 16:51
  • I heard that many American young people intend not to believe the God.

  • I heard that many American young people tend not to believe the God.

    "intend" means "to have in mind as a purpose or goal". I don't know if we can really plan to believe or not to believe something. "tend" means "to be disposed to a way of thinking" or "have a tendency to".

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  • Do they only often doubt a particular dogma, or don't they believe the existence of the God?

  • Do they only often doubt a particular dogma, or don't they believe (in) the existence of God?

 
  • Only particular dogmas by particular religionists aren't Chiristian theology.

  • Only particular dogmas of particular religionists aren't Christian theology.

    or "only particular dogmas promoted by particular...."

 
  • Or many churches may be afraid of being scattered by thoughts of each individuals,

  • Or many churches may be afraid of being scattered by thoughts of each individual,

    "each/every individual" or just "individuals". You can't use "each" here because it implies singularity, and individuals is plural.

 

Well done.

Jun 13, 2012 17:16 chihilo
Thank you very much!
madi
Thank you for your correction!
Jun 15, 2012 15:31
  • explain the theology philosophically

  • explain the theology philosophically

 
  • I think that churches or theologians had better explain the theology philosophically.

  • I think that churches or theologians had better explain their theology philosophically.

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  • The Christian theology is very well made.

  • The Christian theology is very well made.

    ^To say 'made' indicates it is well written yet not true.

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Jun 15, 2012 18:29 chihilo
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