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Chuppy, get well soon!

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Micamelia's latest journal entries May 11th 2009 23:27 cat

There seemed to be something wrong with my cat this morning.
Her right eyelid was red and puffy.
After I fed her, she went somewhere and wouldn't show herself for a while.
I thought it was strange because she loved being near someone in my family.
(Cats have a habit of hiding themselves when they are injured or feel sick.)

So my mother and brother took her to a hospital this afternoon.
The doctor said he didn't know what was wrong with her because her eyelid seemed better then.
However, we need to watch her carefully.
Perhaps I'm worried too much though... x(

It seems OK now. She's sleeping at her home position. :)
May 12th 2009 00:01 Rational Humano

My sister has a dog, which is a Labrador and his name is Pepe. I help my sister out because Pepe is full of energy and needs to be walked frequently. So Pepe is part of my family and when he gets hurt, I worry about him a lot.

So I know how you feel right now, worrying about Chuppy. I hope she gets better and becomes her old self again. XD
May 12th 2009 00:30 Bum

I think your English is already so good that it doesn't need to be corrected ^^;
May 12th 2009 00:52 ryankun

  • I thought it was strange because she loved being near someone in my family.
  • I thought it was strange because (usually) she loves being near someone in my family.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • She's sleeping at her home position.
  • She's sleeping in her home position.

1 people think this correction is good.  
Aww hope she feels better!
May 12th 2009 18:22 ポール

Kanashiii desu ne! How is her eyelid today? I hope she is better!
May 12th 2009 18:50 hivernoir

Poor Chuppy... I hope she gets better soon.
May 13th 2009 02:47 97

  • After I fed her, she went somewhere and wouldn't show herself for a while.
  • After I fed her, she disappeared for a while and wouldn't show herself.

 

  • The doctor said he didn't know what was wrong with her because her eyelid seemed better then.
  • The doctor said he didn't know what was wrong with her, because her eyelid seemed better then.

 

  • Perhaps I'm worried too much though...
  • But maybe I'm just worrying too much...

 

  • It seems OK now.
  • She seems okay now.

 
As Bumさん said, it's sort of hard to correct this entry! So instead of correcting it from the 外国人の書いた英文 standpoint, I took more of a composition-teacher-vs-college-student angle on it and corrected you for style.

Again, no real mistakes, just style decisions - some native speakers might disagree with what I fixed - your English is that good!
May 13th 2009 14:34 Micamelia

Hi all,
Thanks for the kind comments!
She seems okay now.
I appreciate your prayers!


- Hi Rational Humano,
Thanks for the comment!
Is the dog in the picture Pepe?
Beautiful!

- Hi Bum,
Thanks!! :D

- Hi ryankun,
Thanks for the corrections!

- Hi ポール,
Thanks for the comment!
Her eyelid is getting better.
ありがとう!

- Hi hivernoir,
Thanks! She's getting better. :)

- Hi デジ,
Thanks!
I want to write like native speakers, so your suggestions are very helpful!!

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