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the lantern festiver

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of 小钦's latest journal entries Feb 09th 2009 15:44
Today is china's lantern feativer,
in the evening let off fireworks.
I like watching fireworks,
feel oneself is shrouded in it.
but it was too clod at night.
in the past five days to go to school,
I'II think of home.
Feb 09th 2009 15:50 xiaozhi
  • Tagalog
  • Mandarin, Japanese

  • the lantern festiver
  • The Lantern Festival
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  • Today is china's lantern feativer,
  • Today is China's Lantern Festival. (it's a proper noun so you need to capitalize the first letters)
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  • in the evening let off fireworks.
  • There are lots of fireworks in the evening.
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  • but it was too clod at night.
  • but it was too cold at night.
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  • in the past five days to go to school,
  • In the past five days that I go to school,
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  • I'II think of home.
  • I'II think of home. (I'm trying to understand what you mean by this because it sounds a bit awkward) ^^;
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I love watching fireworks too! :)
Feb 09th 2009 23:42 aquadee
  • English
  • Korean, Japanese

  • feel oneself is shrouded in it.
  • I like the feeling of being enshrouded in the lights and sounds.
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  • but it was too clod at night.
  • But it was too cold at night.
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  • in the past five days to go to school,
  • These five days that I will go to school,
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Fireworks are so much fun... the ones at Disneyland are my favorite!

Did you get the chance to make those little sweet, sesame dumplings?
小钦
  • Mandarin
  • English, French

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