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I study English grammar. I should conquest weak points.
英語の文法の練習をします。私は弱点を克服しなければなりません

I understood that his business prove (to be) difficult.
私は彼の仕事は難しいとわかった
He proved his business (to be) difficult
彼は自分の仕事が難しいとわかった

Good care should be take of a weak person.
十分な世話を弱者に行うべきだ
A weak person should be taken good care of by man who is rich
弱者は十分な世話を金持ちから受けるべきだ.
Notice should be taken of those working .
彼らの働きは気にかけられるべきだ。
Advantage is taken of train by you
あなたは電車を利用する
Train is taken advantage of by me
私は電車を利用する。

Basic is too important for me
私にとって基本は大事すぎる 

If you afford to check my journal, please correct it
私の日誌をチェックする余裕があれば 訂正してください

see you later (・ー・)ノ
じゃあ また
Apr 30th 2009 01:03 誰かさん

  • I should conquest weak points.
  • I should conquer my weak points.

 

  • I understood that his business prove (to be) difficult.
  • I understand that his business proved (to be) difficult.

 

  • He proved his business (to be) difficult
  • His business proved (to be) difficult

 

  • Good care should be take of a weak person.
  • A weak person should be taken good care of .

 

  • A weak person should be taken good care of by man who is rich
  • A weak person should be taken good care of by a man who is rich

 

  • Advantage is taken of train by you
  • The train is taken advantage of by you

 

  • Train is taken advantage of by me
  • The train is taken advantage of by me

 

  • Basic is important.
  • Basics are important.

 
Good luck
Apr 30th 2009 08:37 s

  • Good care should be take of a weak person.
  • Good care should be taken of the weak.

 

  • 弱者は十分な世話を金持ちから受けるべきだ.
  • The weak should be taken good care of by the wealthy. (The wealthy should take good care of the weak.)

 

  • Advantage is taken of train by you
  • You take advantage of the train. (the passive sounds strange here)

 

  • Basic is too important for me
  • The fundamentals are too important for(to) me

 

  • If you afford to check my journal, please correct it
  • If you have time to check my journal, please correct it

 
Those are really difficult example sentences, even for a native speaker, I think.

I think it sounds better to use terms like "the weak" and "the wealthy" (which refer to weak and rich/wealthy people as a whole) rather than "a weak person" and "a wealthy person" (which makes it sound like you're talking about one specific weak or wealthy person, and sounds unnatural).

I hope what I wrote made sense...
May 01st 2009 04:03 autechre

>誰かさん
Thank you for your correction.
it is very useful for me.
>saritza
I probably understand it.
the weak and the wealthy is natural.
the expression of "a adjective person" is unnatural, when I talk about the wealthy.

I have to see a variety of context to adequately understand it.

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