It was a good dream!

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Last night, I dreamed of a girl by whom I'm attracted, as is often the case with me of these days.If I were a person of Heian era, I'd think I'm loved by her. I envy such a person with his brain having a large flower garden.

昨夜、私は好きな女の子の夢を見ました。それは最近よくあることです。
もし私が平安時代の人間ならば、その子が私のことを想っているのだと考えるでしょう。
そんな脳内お花畑の人間が羨ましいですよ(笑)

お願いします!!
Oct 14th 2011 23:19 Aylowar

  • Last night, I dreamed of a girl by whom I'm attracted, as is often the case with me of these days.
  • Last night I dreamed of a girl that I like, as is often the case with me these days.

 

  • If I were a person of Heian era, I'd think I'm loved by her.
  • If I were a person of Heian era, I'd think she is thinking about me.

 

  • I envy such a person with his brain having a large flower garden.
  • I envy people with such romantic attitude to life. (the best I could think of, sorry)

 
9/10 of my dreams are horrors of a sort, so I envy you ^^
Oct 20th 2011 20:49 Evgenia
Hm.I think that you should watch movies in Japanese with English subtables and English movies with English subtables.
Your way of building sentences is very Asian,English has a completely different melody.Compare Japanese and English poetry and song lyrics!

Last night, I dreamed of a girl I'm attracted too.
It happens often with me these days.
If I were someone from Heian era, I'd think she would love me too.
I envy them for their minds and their flower gardens.



Do not,ever compliment someone for their brain.Its like complimenting for having two feet or one head.If you are complimenting for their thoughts and ideas,there is many other words like a word "mind" and you can compliment for "a beautiful mind","quickness of the thought","sweet idea"
Oct 20th 2011 22:39 Ryosuke
Thank you for correcting my passage in detail.
I'll watch movies with English subtitles.

I can't use the word "BRAIN" for complimenting someone's mind(thought/idea), can I? I see!

If you can, I want you to correct my Asian English in future.
Please make friends with me!
Oct 20th 2011 22:44 Evgenia
Of course.I would be happy too.
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