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yeah! Wow, congratulations Erinaさん, I knew you could do it ^^. I think it is exciting because you must feel like having a new life, or don't you?
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for the first time in a lon... You'll be fine =D
it's good to hear from you again. Sorry about the lack of corrections, everyone else seemed to take care of that.
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for the first time in a lon... Hi erinaさん, what kind of things do they ask you on the examination? I hope you pass it ^^.. I mean.. you WILL past it :)
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beautiful HANABI In America its the opposite ^^. Women don't really confess to guys on valentines day or give chocolates to men. Instead men buy gifts and...
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beautiful HANABI I wish I could receive chocolates from women haha, it's been a long time since I received something on Valentine's Day. :(
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tell me how to ddistinguish Well, erinaさん, the three of them have different meanings:
"He is an only child." - It means that 'he' is the only son of his...
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tell me how to ddistinguish The sentences you wrote could be corrected as below. Sorry, I had to cut and paste.
tell me how to ddistinguish
tell me how to disti...
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tell me how to ddistinguish "He is an only child" Means that his parents have no other children.
"He is the only child" Unless you follow it b...
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tell me how to ddistinguish 1. He is an only child.
An only child is someone who has no brothers or sisters. The term is usually used after the child gets older a...
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Goood Japanese sweets Thank you for visiting my page~!! ^_^
We also have omochi in Indonesia too.
We call id "kue mochi" means, mochi cake. (See th...
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Untitled** Thank you for visiting my page!
Maybe by writing on lang-8, would help you to improve your swriting skills.
Let's write more !! ^__^
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Untitled** ongakujinさん
コメントありがとう!
is the use of the word insipid insulting??
Oh,I did'nt know it XP
He may use more encouraging adjective.
But ...
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Untitled** Generally, when teachers say that is because they want to read more detailed information in your essay. For example, investigate more on ...
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Goood Japanese sweets Yeah, global warming is not a good thing.. and we can't do something about it.. it all depends on big companies who are really responsibl...
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Untitled** Your english is very good!
In short, he is saying that your paper could be stronger. And he called your paper insipid? In America, the u...
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Library Haha don't worry erinaさん, this happens a lot to me too.. and then you say: "Oh... that's why there aren't too many people around..&q...
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The first diary i suggested a few corrections here in addition to those of supanova. your english seems to be quite ok. but of course, "practice mak...
Wow, congratulations Erinaさん, I knew you could do it ^^. I think it is exciting because you must feel like having a new life, or don't you?
Thanks for correct my diary(*^_^*)
oops.. I meant: you WILL pass it..
You'll be fine =D it's good to hear from you again. Sorry about the lack of corrections, everyone else seemed to take care of that. It...
Hi erinaさん, what kind of things do they ask you on the examination? I hope you pass it ^^.. I mean.. you WILL past it :)
I hope you passed your entrance exam! Don't worry, it will be March 7th before you know it. :-)
Your diary is very understandable, but I just made the sentences sound more natural.
i know your feeling!! Wish you pass the exam!! ;-)
Rest well erinaさん
Haha, yeah. I did that yestereday during a lecture in psychology. Sooo tired..... Have a goodnight's sleep
In America its the opposite ^^. Women don't really confess to guys on valentines day or give chocolates to men. Instead men buy gifts and...
I wish I could receive chocolates from women haha, it's been a long time since I received something on Valentine's Day. :(
It's really beautiful=)
Well, erinaさん, the three of them have different meanings: "He is an only child." - It means that 'he' is the only son of his...
The sentences you wrote could be corrected as below. Sorry, I had to cut and paste. tell me how to ddistinguish tell me how to disti...
"He is an only child" Means that his parents have no other children. "He is the only child" Unless you follow it b...
1. He is an only child. An only child is someone who has no brothers or sisters. The term is usually used after the child gets older a...
Thank you for visiting my page~!! ^_^ We also have omochi in Indonesia too. We call id "kue mochi" means, mochi cake. (See th...
Thank you for visiting my page! Maybe by writing on lang-8, would help you to improve your swriting skills. Let's write more !! ^__^
ongakujinさん コメントありがとう! is the use of the word insipid insulting?? Oh,I did'nt know it XP He may use more encouraging adjective. But ...
Generally, when teachers say that is because they want to read more detailed information in your essay. For example, investigate more on ...
Yeah, global warming is not a good thing.. and we can't do something about it.. it all depends on big companies who are really responsibl...
Your english is very good! In short, he is saying that your paper could be stronger. And he called your paper insipid? In America, the u...
Haha don't worry erinaさん, this happens a lot to me too.. and then you say: "Oh... that's why there aren't too many people around..&q...
i suggested a few corrections here in addition to those of supanova. your english seems to be quite ok. but of course, "practice mak...
^_^ Pretty good. I could understand it. Good luck (with English & exam).
Pretty good. Gambatte !