Mars
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In the solar system, Mars is the fourth planet from the sun, located between Earth and Jupiter. The gravity of Mars is one third of that of the Earth. Mars is a terrestrial planet, as it means that we can land on the surface of Mars. The name of Mars is named after Ares, one of the Greek deities, who is in charge of war.
Some people say that living creature may have existed on Mars since there are many evidences for the presence of water on Mars surface. One of the noticeable thing on Mars is Olympus Mons, which is the tallest volcano on Mars, and maximum height above the surface of it is about 27 km and its area is immense enough to cover the whole part of Korean peninsula.
Mars is referred to the planet on which mankind possibly found a colony because of the fact that its atmosphere and environment are most similar to the Earth. If it is possible to terrafrom the Mars, humankind may leave the Earth for Mars in order to continue their lives and growth. I wish we can pull off turning mars into the place where we can live some day!
Some people say that living creature may have existed on Mars since there are many evidences for the presence of water on Mars surface. One of the noticeable thing on Mars is Olympus Mons, which is the tallest volcano on Mars, and maximum height above the surface of it is about 27 km and its area is immense enough to cover the whole part of Korean peninsula.
Mars is referred to the planet on which mankind possibly found a colony because of the fact that its atmosphere and environment are most similar to the Earth. If it is possible to terrafrom the Mars, humankind may leave the Earth for Mars in order to continue their lives and growth. I wish we can pull off turning mars into the place where we can live some day!
The gravity of Mars is one third of that of the Earth.
The gravity of Mars is one third of the Earth's.
Mars is a terrestrial planet, as it means that we can land on the surface of Mars. (or "its surface")
The name of Mars is named after Ares, one of the Greek deities, who is in charge of war.
I find that the succession " name...named" is sounds heavy.
Some people say that living creature may have existed on Mars since there are many evidences IN FAVOUR OF (or " APPROVING") the presence of water on Mars surface.
One of the noticeable thing on Mars is Olympus Mons, which is the tallest volcano on Mars. Its maximum height (above the surface) of it is about 27 km and its area is immense enough to cover the entire Korean peninsula.
Mars is referred to as the planet on which mankind can (or "could") possibly found a colony because of the fact that its atmosphere and environment are most similar to the Earth's.
TO be refered to as ~.
In my English essays, I use the structure "the fact that..." so much that the person who is reading kind of gets lost. So in some cases, it's better to not use it :-)
If it is possible to terrafrom the Mars, humankind may leave the Earth for Mars in order to continue their lives and growth (or" expansion").
I wish we can pull off turning Mars into the place where we can live some day!
Mars is the Roman name for Ares, the Greek diety of war.
Some people say that living creatures may have existed on Mars since there is much evidence for the presence of water on Mars's surface.
If it is possible to terrafrom the Mars, humankind may leave the Earth for Mars in order to continue expanding.
That would be like a planetary form of "manifest destiny" ~!
The gravity of Mars is one third of that of the earth.
It's true that "earth" can be capitalized or not. It can also we written with "the" or not. But when you write it with "the", use lowercase. When writing it without "the", use a capital because it's being used as a name:
the earth
Earth
Mars is a terrestrial planet, which it means that we can land on the surface.
The name "Mars" comes from Ares, the Greek god of war.
Some people say that life may have existed on Mars since there is a lot of evidence for the presence of water on Mars surface.
From what I've read, water is 100 percent confirmed on Mars.
One of the notable features on Mars is Olympus Mons, which is the tallest volcano on Mars. The summit reaches about 27 km and its area is immense enough to cover the whole part of the Korean Peninsula.
It's also the tallest mountain in the solar system. :)
Mars is considered by scientists to be a planet on which mankind could possibly found a colony because of the fact that its atmosphere and environment are most similar to the Earth.
It seems like you are mixing two ideas here. First, Mars could be settled one day because of its atmosphere. Second, it is the most likely candidate for settlement because of its attributes. I've "unmixed" it a bit. :)
If it is possible to terraform the Mars, humankind may leave the Earth for Mars in order to continue their lives and growth.
No "the" before a name unless there is a common name in it:
Detroit
the Detroit Bridge
I hope we can pull off turning Mars into a place where we can live some day!
"wish" is hoping for something that's impossible. "hope" is for something that is possible (usually).
I wish I could fly by flapping my arms.
I hope I can fly an airplane one day.