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Jun 10, 2012 02:28 burtstar made 10 corrections for Italy Movie "Cops and ...
You might want to add a final sentence stating whether you enjoyed the movie or that it gave you an idea of how films looked so many year...
May 29, 2012 00:24 David made 9 corrections for Friends
Excellent writing! I hope all goes well!
May 28, 2012 11:10 啊色 commented on Her Voice Forum
Dear burtstar, x13420x, and Jon: Thank you very much for your encouragement and support:) Yes, she once worked as a nude model for painters.
May 28, 2012 07:51 Jon made 13 corrections for Her Voice Forum
Nice writeup! She sounds like a strong person. :)
May 28, 2012 05:37 x13420x made 3 corrections for Her Voice Forum
Very good work!
May 28, 2012 01:31 burtstar commented on Her Voice Forum
Almost perfect. All that is missing is what she is doing now. Is she someone who is famous? Would the average Chinese reader know about her?
May 27, 2012 09:04 Jon made 5 corrections for Sundial
There's a monument in Chinese on Angel Island, near where I live. I was translating it once for some friends. That was quite a chal...
May 24, 2012 10:41 happyhippo made 9 corrections for Taking a Walk
非常好! 你的語法也很好。加油!
May 24, 2012 00:25 sirpoot made 8 corrections for Taking a Walk
That was one long walk!
May 23, 2012 15:55 happyhippo made 7 corrections for Having Lunch with Professor...
Very well written. Great job! I hope my comments are clear enough to convey the slight corrections. Your understanding of English grammar...
May 23, 2012 05:21 x13420x commented on Having Lunch with Professor...
You can find many Berkeley courses on itunes for free. Berkeley is one of the top universities in the world.
May 23, 2012 00:37 ティフ made 5 corrections for Having Lunch with Professor...
LOL! I like that joke
May 22, 2012 11:42 x13420x made 13 corrections for A Nice Auntie
Very touching entry! I love elderly people also.
May 21, 2012 03:02 hasefet made 14 corrections for Seeing Documentary
Good work!
May 21, 2012 01:49 AmericanEnglish made 10 corrections for Seeing Documentary
Wow, a hard year for this man. Did you feel that he was working too hard for nothing? This was another fun essay to read. Pay attentio...
May 16, 2012 17:03 Jon made 14 corrections for Backbone of a Book
Computers and networks make publishing and communicating enormously cheaper and easier.
May 16, 2012 13:40 burtstar commented on Backbone of a Book
E-publishing also allows you to publish magazine-article length features on sites such as amazon.com. You can also use the "print ...
May 16, 2012 05:41 Sedgehead made 1 corrections for Backbone of a Book
80,000 to 100,000 is good for a first time novelist. I have 65,000 words in my first novel and 240,000 in my autobiography! Neither are...
May 16, 2012 04:56 Maz made 6 corrections for Backbone of a Book
Your writing is superb! and I agree! I think it's a type of deflation of the conceptual idea of "the book". Before not a lo...
May 15, 2012 09:54 happyhippo made 11 corrections for Men's Toilet for Women
I'd be interested to know how they altered the bathrooms to facilitate this. Keep in mind that some of my changes are based on Americ...
May 15, 2012 09:18 x13420x commented on Men's Toilet for Women
This invites so many different problems.
May 15, 2012 03:16 hasefet made 8 corrections for Men's Toilet for Women
Good stuff.
May 13, 2012 02:33 Mellybob made 9 corrections for The Top 10 Singer Contest
请问一下, 你是上海哪个大学的? 我以前上了一个暑假教程在复但大学而我的一个台湾朋友再摸个上海大学读书。
May 12, 2012 17:51 Jon made 10 corrections for Taiwan
Newspapers everywhere share in this tendency. :(
May 12, 2012 01:26 AmericanEnglish made 4 corrections for Taiwan
Sorry I made some mistakes in my last correction, this one is better :(
May 12, 2012 01:19 AmericanEnglish made 9 corrections for Taiwan
There is a lot of good English writing here. Work on mastering the definite article ("the"). Make sure that your subjects and...
May 11, 2012 16:07 Jon made 8 corrections for Discover the Deep Sea
I would have liked that talk, if my language skills were up to the task. Sounds like fun!
May 11, 2012 03:14 Mellybob made 10 corrections for Discover the Deep Sea
You're vocabulary is impressive, as is your sentence structure. Just some choices that were hard to understand. Watch lots of English...
May 9, 2012 18:53 Jon made 11 corrections for A Lecture: Book and Newspaper
Sounds like it would have been interesting to me, too!
May 9, 2012 17:18 LightCider made 16 corrections for A Lecture: Book and Newspaper
That's a strange dilemma for the newspaper companies. Perhaps if books also did advertising within their pages?
May 5, 2012 11:05 x13420x made 3 corrections for The Power of Culture
"It is hard to believe that deaf people can perform such a beautiful dance." This sentence comes across as offensive. Being...
May 5, 2012 10:13 Peter 小芒果~오윤재 made 8 corrections for The Power of Culture
Really good job! Keep up the great work! That style of dancing looks really cool! It must have been such an amazing experience!!!! (^____...
May 3, 2012 15:30 burtstar made 11 corrections for International Labour Day
Nice job. Note that the British spell it "labour," the Americans "labor."
May 1, 2012 11:21 ying made 10 corrections for The Rate of Domestic Direct...
That's too bad. I use skype to talk to my friends for free. Can you use skype in China?
Apr 30, 2012 00:38 George made 3 corrections for Haircut
Really good effort. The mistakes you made were very minor, and any English speaker would have understood exactly what you meant. Well done.
Apr 29, 2012 05:25 Peter 小芒果~오윤재 made 8 corrections for Seeing Like a State
Really good!!! Your English keeps getting better! I agree with your point of view in this post! ^_^ Keep up the great work, you're ve...
Apr 26, 2012 04:36 Peter 小芒果~오윤재 made 6 corrections for I Lost Smart Card
Hi! Your English is really really good, keep up the great work! I really hope you find your lost card, and it was really nice of you to h...
Apr 24, 2012 07:29 x13420x commented on The Art of Loving
Love is such a subjective word. For me I get a sense of social connectivity from the word. There can also be love based on empathy. ...
Apr 24, 2012 04:56 made 7 corrections for The Art of Loving
Thanks, this is extremely interesting! I must say I agree with him in general. A lot of people are saying "I love you" but I th...
Apr 24, 2012 04:20 Maz made 5 corrections for The Art of Loving
Keep it up! These are problems even natives struggle with!
Apr 23, 2012 00:05 made 15 corrections for An Extraordinary Woman: Salome
Very good and interesting! "His theories have been influencing the world"/"His theories influenced the world": Beca...
Apr 21, 2012 03:05 Hanna made 5 corrections for Rumor about Mendeleev
You did a good job!! Your grammar is really good - I just added a few words that I thought could make your paper sound more fluent. Keep ...
Apr 21, 2012 00:25 x13420x commented on Rumor about Mendeleev
When they awarded Obama with a prize for promoting peace then many Americans realized that the prize was just a joke. It reminds me of &...
Apr 20, 2012 05:56 Peter 小芒果~오윤재 made 6 corrections for A Pleasant Dinner
Hello! 好久不见啊!(^____^) Your English is amazing! Your writing is really, really good! Keep up the awesome work! There was hardly anything f...
Apr 10, 2012 00:56 aelstome made 7 corrections for A Spring Outing (I)
Good job. Sounds like the park was beautiful. :)
Apr 7, 2012 01:09 aelstome made 12 corrections for I Come Back
Good job. Good luck on the paper.
Mar 29, 2012 05:08 Sedgehead made 10 corrections for Visiting Laser World of Pho...
I've spent three hours on lang-8 so far today, so I edited selectively!
Mar 27, 2012 07:57 greenbubble made 6 corrections for Monday
Good work - I enjoyed reading your entry!
Mar 24, 2012 10:44 康纳 made 15 corrections for Visiting Laser World of Pho...
你又一次写得很不错啊
Mar 22, 2012 16:36 Vinhara made 2 corrections for Buying Gifts
I'm glad you found what you wanted! Flowers are really calming to look at, so you sound like you had a good day. ^^