My daughter's diary
I went to the pool with my friend.
I went to there by train.
I have been there three times.
I got up at seven.
And we got into a train at nine.
We arrived there at eleven.
We took lunch as soon as we arrived there.
I ate French fried potatoes and Chinese noodles.
And my friend ate fried noodles.
We enjoyed to swim in the pool very much.
I came back at six.
I was very tired because I swimed in the pool very much.
And I was very hungry.
Today's dinner was hamburger steak.
I ate a lot.
Today was very nice day.
I want to go to the pool again.
I went to there by train.
I have been there three times.
I got up at seven.
And we got into a train at nine.
We arrived there at eleven.
We took lunch as soon as we arrived there.
I ate French fried potatoes and Chinese noodles.
And my friend ate fried noodles.
We enjoyed to swim in the pool very much.
I came back at six.
I was very tired because I swimed in the pool very much.
And I was very hungry.
Today's dinner was hamburger steak.
I ate a lot.
Today was very nice day.
I want to go to the pool again.
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I went to there by train.
We took ate lunch as soon as we arrived there.
We enjoyed to swimming in the pool very much.
I was very tired because I swimed swam in the pool very much.
Thank you very much for your correction.
In four correction sentences, beginning and the 2nd advice were helpful in particular.
And I did not know that "fried potetoes" meant the fries of whole potato.
In Japanese McDonald's, "fries" is called "マック フライ ポテト".