My daughter's diary

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I went to the pool with my friend.
I went to there by train.
I have been there three times.

I got up at seven.
And we got into a train at nine.
We arrived there at eleven.

We took lunch as soon as we arrived there.
I ate French fried potatoes and Chinese noodles.
And my friend ate fried noodles.

We enjoyed to swim in the pool very much.

I came back at six.
I was very tired because I swimed in the pool very much.
And I was very hungry.

Today's dinner was hamburger steak.
I ate a lot.
Today was very nice day.
I want to go to the pool again.
Jul 31st 2011 19:34 Tauschung

  • I went to there by train.
  • I went to there by train.

 

  • We took lunch as soon as we arrived there.
  • We took ate lunch as soon as we arrived there.

 

  • We enjoyed to swim in the pool very much.
  • We enjoyed to swimming in the pool very much.

 

  • I was very tired because I swimed in the pool very much.
  • I was very tired because I swimed swam in the pool very much.

 
On a side note, here in the U.S., French fried potatoes are usually called "French fries" or just "fries."
Jul 31st 2011 23:12 torch
Hi Tauschung.
Thank you very much for your correction.

In four correction sentences, beginning and the 2nd advice were helpful in particular.
And I did not know that "fried potetoes" meant the fries of whole potato.

In Japanese McDonald's, "fries" is called "マック フライ ポテト".

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