Flu 2

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of hula girl's latest journal entries Jan 14th 2012 20:55
As I wrote a diary yesterday, I had the flu. Today I had no fever. I am very happy.

Today I was looking for the school for Hawaiian massage it is called lomi lomi, because I want to study it.

I am staying at home tomorrow, too, and am going to work on Monday. I am looking forward to going to the gym after work.
Jan 16th 2012 01:05 mcfroob

  • As I wrote a diary yesterday, I had the flu.
  • As I wrote in my diary yesterday, I had the flu.

 
ほとんど完璧です!
Jan 17th 2012 00:38 hula girl
Thank you for correcting.
Jan 18th 2012 12:20 jimjamjeniko

  • Today I was looking for the school for Hawaiian massage it is called lomi lomi, because I want to study it.
  • Today I was looking for a school for Hawaiian massage it is called lomi lomi, because I want to study it.

 
I'm glad that you're feeling better! (This comment is a bit late, haha)
Jan 18th 2012 20:47 hula girl
Right. It is difficult to use "a" and "the".
Jan 19th 2012 08:30 jimjamjeniko
In that sentence, if you used 'the' it would mean, a school which I have already talked about for Hawaiian massage, or it means that there is only one school for hawaiian massage. So, it's not necessarily wrong...

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