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nigatsu ni juu ichi nichi

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of gie's latest journal entries Feb 24th 2009 13:09
kyou wa hi ga teru. Dakara kesa wa fuku wo aratta. Hiru toki, fuku wa kawaku natta. Kyou wa dokomo ikanakatta, sorede imoto to ie wo sojishita. tsukareta ne..demo omoshirokatta. Ie wa kirei ni natta.
Feb 24th 2009 13:23 kanako

  • kyou wa hi ga teru.
  • kyou wa ii tenki datta (better).
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  • Hiru toki, fuku wa kawaku natta.
  • Hiru doki ni, fuku ga kawaita.
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God job ! haha
I have to clean my room today...!!

Your Japanese is very good !
Feb 24th 2009 13:28 kuri

  • kyou wa hi ga teru.
  • kyou wa hi ga tetteiru. "It is sunny day" in English. If you want to say "it is fine today", "kyou wa tenki ga ii".
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  • Hiru toki, fuku wa kawaku natta.
  • Hiru doki, fuku wa kawaita. Kawaku (prezent)→Kawaita(past)
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  • Kyou wa dokomo ikanakatta, sorede imoto to ie wo sojishita.
  • Kyou wa dokomo ikanakatta, sorede imouto to ie wo soujishita.
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  • Ie wa kirei ni natta.
  • Ie ga kirei ni natta. Ie wa kirei ni natta is ok but in this sentence, I prefer to use "wa"
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Good Japanese^^
Kyou wa isogashi katta ne?
Ie wo kirei ni suruto kibun ga ii yone^^
(Tiding up rooms make me feel good^^ ne)
Feb 25th 2009 12:55 Jo

  • Hiru toki, fuku wa kawaku natta.
  • Hiru tokini, fuku wa kawaku nattakawaita.
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  • Ie wa kirei ni natta.
  • Ie wa kirei ni natta.Menurut saya kalimat ini oke.
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Feb 25th 2009 14:27 gie

arigatou..mina san
gie
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