My First Diary
Hello. I'm writting my first diary.
I'm not confident about my English, but I'll do my best.
Today, I played baseball with my friend whom I had known at elementary school. We hadn't met for a while, so it was a great time.
We not only enjoyed baseball, but also talked about what had happened to us recently. I had never done such a thing with him, so it was a really good experience.
Actually I'm job-hunting now, and I'm taking an interview test tomorrow.I've already taken some interview tests, so I'm not so nervous. I'll just do my best.
Could you correct my English errors please, if you like.
I'm not confident about my English, but I'll do my best.
Today, I played baseball with my friend whom I had known at elementary school. We hadn't met for a while, so it was a great time.
We not only enjoyed baseball, but also talked about what had happened to us recently. I had never done such a thing with him, so it was a really good experience.
Actually I'm job-hunting now, and I'm taking an interview test tomorrow.I've already taken some interview tests, so I'm not so nervous. I'll just do my best.
Could you correct my English errors please, if you like.
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Today, I played baseball with my friend whom I had known at since elementary school.
We hadn't haven't met for a while, so it was a great time.
We not only enjoyed didn't only enjoy baseball, but also talked about what had happened has been happening to us recently.
I had have never done such a thing with him, so it was a really good experience.
I'm writting my first diary.
Today, I played baseball with my friend(s) whom I have known at since elementary school.
We not only enjoyed baseball, but also talked about what has happened to us recently.
Today, I played baseball with my friend whom I had known at elementary school.Either,Today, I played baseball with my friends, whom I have known since elementary school.or Today, I played baseball with my friend, who I have known since elementary school.I think there was just one friend, right? In that case, you want the second option :)
I've already taken some interview tests, so I'm not so too nervous.