My First Diary

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Hello. I'm writting my first diary.
I'm not confident about my English, but I'll do my best.
Today, I played baseball with my friend whom I had known at elementary school. We hadn't met for a while, so it was a great time.
We not only enjoyed baseball, but also talked about what had happened to us recently. I had never done such a thing with him, so it was a really good experience.
Actually I'm job-hunting now, and I'm taking an interview test tomorrow.I've already taken some interview tests, so I'm not so nervous. I'll just do my best.
Could you correct my English errors please, if you like.
Feb 22nd 2009 19:12 Anh

  • Today, I played baseball with my friend whom I had known at elementary school.
  • Today, I played baseball with my friend whom I had known at since elementary school.

 

  • We hadn't met for a while, so it was a great time.
  • We hadn't haven't met for a while, so it was a great time.

 

  • We not only enjoyed baseball, but also talked about what had happened to us recently.
  • We not only enjoyed didn't only enjoy baseball, but also talked about what had happened has been happening to us recently.

 

  • I had never done such a thing with him, so it was a really good experience.
  • I had have never done such a thing with him, so it was a really good experience.

 
I think your English is good, keep it up! Good luck with your interview!
Feb 22nd 2009 19:18 dorkwacape

  • I'm writting my first diary.
  • I'm writting my first diary.

 

  • Today, I played baseball with my friend whom I had known at elementary school.
  • Today, I played baseball with my friend(s) whom I have known at since elementary school.

 

  • We not only enjoyed baseball, but also talked about what had happened to us recently.
  • We not only enjoyed baseball, but also talked about what has happened to us recently.

 
英語はうまいですよ。不自然なとこもないし、文法もほとんど完璧だし、すごいですよ。面接を頑張ってください。
Mar 02nd 2009 02:53 rainy

GOOD LUCKY FOR YOU!^^
Dec 12th 2009 12:55 Troter

  • Today, I played baseball with my friend whom I had known at elementary school.
  • Today, I played baseball with my friend whom I had known at elementary school.Either,Today, I played baseball with my friends, whom I have known since elementary school.or Today, I played baseball with my friend, who I have known since elementary school.I think there was just one friend, right? In that case, you want the second option :)

 

  • I've already taken some interview tests, so I'm not so nervous.
  • I've already taken some interview tests, so I'm not so too nervous.

 
Your English is really good! Good luck finding a job!
Masaki
  • Japanese
  • English, Italian

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